Wild Places
The Dog in the Pines
The engine noise died when I turned the key, leaving only the ticking of cooling metal and Bracken's heavy breathing beside me. I had spent three hours driving north from Edinburgh through morning traffic, over the M90 and up the A9, then along a B-road and about three kilometres of rough forestry track.
The engine noise died when I turned the key, leaving only the ticking of cooling metal and Bracken's heavy breathing beside me. I had spent three hours driving north from Edinburgh through morning traffic, over the M90 and up the A9, then along a B-road and about three kilometres of rough forestry track. Even so, my shoulders still held the tension I had carried out of my flat that morning.
The silence felt good. Properly good.
I climbed out of the four-wheel-drive pickup and stretched the stiffness from my back while I surveyed the small forestry car park. It was empty: a patch of rutted gravel beside an access gate and a timber sign pointing towards the hill paths. Notices from Forestry and Land Scotland warned about deer stalking, forestry operations, ticks, wildfire risk and responsible access.
Perfect. The last thing I wanted was to meet fair-weather walkers with loud voices and pristine kit they barely knew how to use.
Bracken jumped down from the passenger side and immediately began sniffing around the wheels. His tail swept from side to side as he investigated whatever scents other dogs had left behind. The afternoon breeze stirred his thick grey-and-white coat, and excitement quickened every movement. He knew we were heading into the woods.
I pulled my rucksack from the load bed and checked my equipment once more. Ten years in the British Army had left me with habits I could not switch off. Always verify your kit before you need it.
I was also a licensed deer stalker, and I had permission from the estate to stalk and fish on this ground. My legally held bolt-action rifle remained unloaded in its proper slip for the walk in. A secured case held my 12-bore shotgun, and my compound bow was fastened to the side of the rucksack with a quiver of five carbon target arrows. I had paid nearly GBP 40 for each arrow and broadhead, though the bow was strictly for target practice. Bowhunting was not lawful here.
It was more equipment than an ordinary camping trip required, but this was not an ordinary roadside campsite. I would be alone in remote Highland country for several days, and I preferred knowing exactly what I had with me.
The path began as a narrow strip of earth disappearing among Scots pine, birch and rowan. I checked the map again and committed the route to memory. The discreet wild-camping site I had marked lay roughly three hours away on foot, across steep and broken ground at the eastern edge of the Cairngorms. It was far enough from the road that I should hear no traffic at all.
Just me, Bracken and whatever peace I could find out there.
"Come on, boy," I called. Bracken was still examining something fascinating near the signpost.
He trotted over and fell into step beside me as we entered the forest.
The first hour took us steadily uphill through stands of Scots pine and silver birch, with heather and blaeberry thick beneath them. My boots held well on the stony path, and my breathing remained even despite the climb. It felt good to move with purpose again, to use my body for something other than sitting behind a desk or forcing my way through crowds in Edinburgh.
Bracken ranged ahead and doubled back, pursuing interesting smells and the occasional flash of a red squirrel, but always circling round to make certain I was following. We stopped twice for water. I watched him drink from his collapsible bowl while I studied the country around us.
The woodland grew denser as we climbed. Branches knitted together overhead, blocking much of the sky. Signs of wildlife were everywhere: red-deer prints in patches of mud, scratches on bark, droppings among the heather and bird calls echoing between the trunks.
This was what I had missed through years of deployments and city living.
By the time we reached the place marked on my map, the afternoon was well advanced. It was 3 September 2026.
I found a natural opening among the trees about 45 metres from a burn that ran clear over rounded stones. The site was large enough for my tent without obstructing the path or damaging vegetation, and the burn would provide water once it had been filtered and boiled. The surrounding ground sat at roughly 900 metres, hemmed in by rounded ridges, steep glens and exposed upland forest.
I lowered my rucksack and began setting up while Bracken explored the edge of the clearing. He moved in broad circles with his nose down, occasionally stopping when some scent caught his attention. His behaviour was entirely normal: alert, curious and full of energy, exactly as he always was in unfamiliar country.
The tent went up quickly. I arranged the sleeping compartment with Bracken's usual place in the enclosed porch, then set the compact stove well away from the fabric. Damp weather had left the ground and dead vegetation wet, and there was little wind, so I cleared out an old stone fire scar and prepared a very small, controlled fire for later. I gathered only fallen deadwood and kept water beside it. Lighting a fire in woodland was never routine, and I would put it out completely before sleeping.
Bracken returned from his circuit and settled near the cold stones while I prepared dinner. It was nothing elaborate, just a dehydrated expedition meal heated on the stove and a mug of tea. The sun was already sinking behind the rounded ridges. The temperature would fall sharply after dark, but my clothing and sleeping bag were rated for worse.
I ate slowly, enjoying the quiet sounds around us: water running over stones in the burn, wind brushing the pine branches and an occasional bird calling in the distance.
No traffic. No blue-light sirens. No neighbours talking in the stairwell. No voice except my own when I spoke to Bracken.
It was exactly what I had wanted.
The feeling began as I finished eating and cleaned the cooking gear. I could not identify it at first. Something had changed in the woodland around us.
The birds had stopped calling. Even the wind among the trees seemed muted.
Bracken noticed it too. He lifted his head and stared towards the woodland edge on the far side of the clearing. My eyes moved automatically from left to right, following the search pattern learned during years of patrols. I looked for movement where there should have been stillness, shapes that broke the natural lines of trunks and undergrowth, any indication that we were not alone.
There was nothing.
Only dark gaps between the trees and the ordinary shadows of dense woodland.
I shook off the unease and returned to my gear. Deployments had left me with reflexes that sometimes triggered without cause. Alertness was useful; allowing it to rule me was not.
The sun disappeared beyond the ridge, and darkness settled over the campsite. I lit the small fire and rested against a fallen log, enjoying its modest warmth. Bracken curled beside me, comfortable in his thick coat as the air cooled. Stars emerged overhead, brighter than anything visible above Edinburgh.
I stayed awake longer than planned, adding the occasional small piece of wood and listening to the burn. It was the first genuine peace I had felt in months. There were no deadlines and no responsibilities, no one expecting anything from me except Bracken, and he was content as long as we were together.
If the weather held, I thought, I might extend the trip by a day.
At about midnight I drowned the fire, stirred the ash and checked it with the back of my hand until I was satisfied it was cold. Then I crawled into my sleeping bag. Bracken settled in the tent porch, close enough for me to hear his breathing and positioned where he could see through the mesh towards the clearing. Years earlier I had trained him to wake at unfamiliar sounds. Neither of us had ever quite lost the habit of vigilance.
Sleep came easily in the cold Highland air, but something pulled me awake at about 02:00.
It might have been a sound. It might have been the same instinct that had kept me alive in dangerous places.
I remained motionless, listening into the darkness beyond the tent. A soft rustling came from near the edge of the clearing. Red deer, perhaps. A feral goat moving through the heather. A badger nosing among the roots.
But the noise was too deliberate. Too careful. It sounded like something trying not to be heard and failing by the smallest degree.
I rolled silently towards the porch. Bracken's bulk was visible in the faint glow left by the stars, but he was not moving. His head was not raised. His ears were not forward. He gave no indication that he had heard anything unusual.
That was wrong. Bracken always reacted to unfamiliar sounds, particularly at night.
The rustling continued for several minutes, shifting slowly around the clearing, then faded.
I took my torch and opened the inner door as quietly as I could. Bracken raised his head when I entered the porch, but he did not stand or show concern. He merely watched me with calm blue eyes while I swept the beam across the woodland edge.
Nothing moved within the light. The forest looked exactly as it had before we slept: dark trunks, dense undergrowth and ordinary shadows between the trees.
I listened for several more minutes, but whatever had made the sound had gone.
"Just an animal, boy," I whispered.
Bracken lowered his head to his paws. I returned to my sleeping bag, though it took longer to fall asleep the second time.
I woke with the sun on 4 September and emerged feeling surprisingly well after the disturbance. Bracken was already outside, sniffing around the limits of the site as though following a scent that interested him. I put water on for strong coffee and considered how to spend the day while the air warmed.
That was when I noticed the prints.
They lay in soft mud beside the burn, about 9 metres from the tent. They were small but sharply defined, each roughly 18 centimetres long and 9 centimetres across at its widest point. At first glance they resembled the bare footprints of a child. Then I saw the proportions.
The heels were too narrow. The forefeet spread unnaturally wide, and each impression ended in seven distinct toes tipped with claw marks.
I crouched beside the clearest print and studied it. Its depth suggested a creature weighing perhaps 25 to 30 kilograms. The steps were short and oddly spaced, nothing like a human gait.
More impressions led away from the burn and around the perimeter of the campsite. I followed them wherever the ground held a mark, finding compressed heather, displaced blaeberry stems and patches where something had passed between bushes.
The trail formed a complete circuit of the clearing before vanishing on stony ground beyond the pines. It had approached from several directions and remained just beyond the firelight, moving around us while we slept.
The thought tightened the skin across my back.
I forced myself to consider ordinary explanations. A distorted red-deer print could appear strange in soft mud. Badgers had powerful claws. A large pine marten might leave marks an inexperienced observer could misread. Feral goats lived in some Highland glens.
But none of those animals left seven-toed impressions shaped like narrow human feet. Nor did any of them walk upright with that stride.
"Bracken. Here, boy."
I expected him to investigate the scent with his usual intensity. He sniffed the nearest print briefly, then turned away. There was no excitement, no wariness and no raised hackles. He behaved as if the track meant nothing.
That seemed wrong, but I told myself the scent might be old or confused by water and damp vegetation.
The rest of the early morning passed normally. I ate breakfast, checked my kit and prepared to fish the burn later. The estate had granted permission when I arranged the stalking access, and I had the necessary written details in my rucksack.
The prints troubled me, but not enough to make me leave. I had come for solitude and was reluctant to let an unidentified night animal drive me back to Edinburgh. Pride played a part, though I did not admit that to myself then. So did the belief that my training made me harder to frighten than other people.
I spent the morning learning the ground around the campsite and looking for suitable pools along the burn. Bracken came with me, but he was less energetic than usual. Instead of ranging ahead, he walked at my side. He showed little interest in deer scent or the red squirrels moving through the canopy.
Perhaps the climb had tired him. Perhaps the altitude was affecting him, though 900 metres was not extreme. I told myself he would adjust after a day's rest.
I returned to the clearest impression and used the scale on my pocket tool to confirm its dimensions. The shape disturbed me more than its size. A human foot did not taper so sharply at the heel, and the grooves beyond those seven toes were unmistakably claws. The mud had dried enough to preserve every detail.
I photographed the prints with my mobile, although I had no idea whom I meant to show.
Euan would probably suggest I had found a deformed badger track and laugh at me for brooding over it. But I knew what badger prints looked like. This was not one.
I followed the circuit again, moving slowly and looking for details I had missed: prints beside my rucksack, prints near the old fire scar, prints where something could have watched the tent porch.
About 6 metres from the tent, I found a rough circle of flattened grass and heather. Something had crouched there for a long time, facing us. The depression was small, consistent with the estimated weight of the tracks, but the vegetation had been pressed almost smooth.
"Bracken, come here."
He walked over without enthusiasm and gave the flattened patch a half-hearted sniff. His nose touched the grass for a second. Then he lost interest and wandered towards the burn.
No raised hackles. No rigid posture. Nothing.
That was not normal for him. Bracken had powerful working instincts, and unfamiliar scents usually held his complete attention.
I watched him walk away. His gait looked sound. There was no limp or visible injury. He seemed merely subdued.
Common sense told me to pack up and return to the pickup. Unknown tracks, deliberate circling and a dog behaving unlike himself added up to a situation I did not understand. Incomplete information could be dangerous.
Yet I was not ready to surrender my trip to something I could not identify. I had come looking for peace, and stubbornness made me treat leaving as failure. That was poor judgement, not sound fieldcraft, though I could only recognise it later.
I spent another hour examining the ground until the sun hardened the exposed mud. Whatever had visited us was gone, perhaps hidden somewhere in the dense woodland during daylight.
Fishing gave me something practical to do. I set up beside a deep pool roughly 90 metres downstream, where the burn slowed beneath an overhanging birch. Bracken accompanied me but lay in the shade instead of investigating the bank. I kept glancing over as I worked the lure, checking for changes. His breathing appeared normal, and he responded when I spoke, but he lacked his usual energy.
The fishing was better than expected. Within two hours I caught two brown trout, enough for that evening's meal and breakfast if I stayed. The simple rhythm of casting and retrieving settled my nerves, and the clean, cold air felt good in my lungs.
I cleaned the fish and packed every scrap into a sealed waste bag to carry out. I was not going to leave remains beside the burn or attract scavengers to the camp.
The afternoon passed quietly while I explored higher ground and searched for further signs. I found several older, blurred impressions beside the water, but they lost all definition where the bank became stone. The trail vanished completely on the rocky slope above the woodland edge.
Bracken stayed close throughout. There were no sudden alerts, no interest in fresh scent and none of the restless energy I expected from him. His behaviour now worried me more than the prints.
By late afternoon I had decided to remain for a second night. Whatever had approached us had displayed curiosity rather than open aggression. The campsite gave reasonable visibility, and the burn guarded one side. My rifle, shotgun and ammunition were sufficient for any ordinary Highland animal, although I knew by then that no native animal matched those tracks.
I cooked the trout early on the stove and gave Bracken a little flaked meat after checking carefully for bones. He ate, but without his usual enthusiasm.
The sun dropped behind the ridge at about 19:30. With the ground still wet and the air calm, I lit another small fire in the existing scar. The rifle remained unloaded and made safe in its open slip beside me. The shotgun stayed secured in its case. There was no reason to handle either weapon merely because darkness had fallen.
Bracken settled in the porch, but there was something different in the way he lay. He seemed passive rather than relaxed. I scratched behind his ears and checked him for pain or illness. His nose was cool, his breathing steady and his gums a healthy colour.
Perhaps he was simply tired from the previous day's climb.
The first hour after sunset passed without incident. I fed the little fire and listened to the woodland settle into night: the burn over stone, wind among pine needles and the occasional call of a night bird.
Then, at about 21:00, the background sounds began to fade.
The change was so gradual I nearly missed it. Bird calls ceased. Small creatures stopped moving in the undergrowth. Even the wind appeared to die, until only the fire and the burn remained audible.
I set down the piece of deadwood in my hand and listened.
Bracken lifted his head but showed no alertness. His ears did not prick forward. His posture did not change. He looked around with mild, almost sleepy curiosity, then lowered his muzzle again.
That lack of response chilled me more than the silence.
The whispers began at midnight.
At first I mistook them for air passing between branches, producing sounds close enough to voices for the mind to impose meaning. But the longer I listened, the clearer the pattern became. The noises came from several points around the campsite: low, breathy syllables that almost formed words but never did.
I extinguished the fire completely, took my torch and removed the rifle from its slip. Only then did I load the magazine. I kept the bolt forward on an empty chamber while I swept the beam across the trees.
The whispers stopped at once.
Movement followed in the undergrowth. Soft rustling marked the repositioning of one thing, then another, beyond the reach of the torch.
"I know you're out there," I called. "Show yourselves."
Silence.
A few seconds later, the whispering resumed, closer now, perhaps 9 metres away. It had rhythm and cadence, like a conversation in a language built for a different mouth. Whenever the torch reached its source, the voices stopped. As soon as I moved the beam elsewhere, they began again from another direction.
The pattern continued for several minutes: whispers in darkness, silence under the light, careful movement through heather and brush.
My breathing quickened. I forced it under control.
More than one creature was moving around me, and they were coordinating. They understood the torch and changed position whenever I tried to expose them.
"Last warning," I shouted. "Identify yourselves."
The response came immediately: low, clicking chatter from at least three directions. It was not human speech, but it was organised communication. The sounds travelled in a rough circle, remaining just beyond the useful reach of my light.
That was when I worked the bolt and chambered a round.
I raised the rifle towards the loudest source, though I still had no visible target and no safe shot. My finger remained outside the trigger guard. Whatever fear was telling me, firing blind into woodland was unthinkable.
The chatter stopped.
The silence was absolute, as though the things beyond the trees had sensed the change in me and withdrawn.
I held position for a full minute. Nothing moved.
Then panic overcame judgement. I angled the rifle into open sky and fired a warning shot.
It was reckless and unlawful, the act of a frightened man abandoning every standard he claimed to live by. The muzzle flash bleached the clearing for an instant, and the report rolled away along the glen.
I cycled the bolt but did not fire again.
There was no response. The whole forest had fallen silent, without even the movement of insects in the heather.
I made the rifle safe and walked the perimeter with my torch, trying to keep the beam steady. Near the place where the chatter had been loudest, I found fresh impressions in the soft ground.
They were the same narrow, seven-toed prints, only deeper and more sharply defined. Something had crouched there less than 9 metres from me. Disturbed stems and snapped twigs showed where it had moved back into the woodland after the shot.
I followed the marks for about 6 metres before they disappeared among stones. More prints encircled the campsite, several within 5 metres of where I had been sitting.
The knowledge that I had been surrounded without detecting the approach made my hands tremble. My training should have told me to disengage, protect Bracken and leave at first light. Instead, my pride interpreted fear as a challenge.
I spent the rest of the night sitting against a large rock with the unloaded rifle across my knees and the torch ready. Bracken slept through everything. Even the rifle shot had failed to wake him.
Morning found me stiff and aching from the position I had held for hours. Cold air stung my face, and every shadow between the pines looked suspicious.
It was 5 September, the beginning of our third day.
Bracken still lay in the porch, curled exactly where he had been when the whispers began. His breathing remained steady, but I could not remember seeing him move once during the night.
I rose carefully and looked around the woodland edge. Daylight made everything ordinary again: Scots pine, birch, rowan and wet heather. Nothing about it appeared threatening.
The fresh tracks proved otherwise. Several intelligent creatures had surrounded the tent and communicated while staying beyond the torchlight.
My first impulse was to pack immediately. Two completed nights had brought unexplained rustling, impossible prints and coordinated harassment. Any reasonable person would have left.
Ten years of service had taught me the value of withdrawing from a position that could not be defended. Trauma and wounded pride twisted that lesson into something else. I told myself that leaving without understanding the threat meant allowing it to follow me unseen. I called stubbornness reconnaissance and fear discipline.
I made strong coffee and considered my options.
The creatures had shown intelligence, but they had also withdrawn when I chambered a round and fled after the shot. I interpreted that as fear of firearms. It was equally possible that they had merely learned something about me.
Nevertheless, I decided to stay one more night.
This time, I meant to be ready.
I spent the morning establishing a simple warning perimeter. Fallen branches were placed where an approach would disturb them. I tied metal cups and small pieces of cooking gear to cord at likely routes through the undergrowth. None of it was elaborate or dangerous; it was only meant to make noise.
Bracken watched without interest. He remained in one place for most of the morning, shifting occasionally but never exploring. I checked him repeatedly for injury, dehydration and fever. I found nothing obvious, only worsening lethargy.
"Come on, boy," I said. "Let's check the perimeter."
He looked at me with his blue eyes but did not rise. After a moment he lowered his head to his paws.
That was profoundly unlike him. A healthy husky did not choose to lie still after an entire night in a tent porch.
The afternoon dragged while I refined the alarms and checked possible lines of approach. The rifle stayed unloaded until dusk. I unlocked the shotgun case and placed cartridges beside it, keeping the gun broken and empty. I also assembled the compound bow and counted the five carbon target arrows in the quiver.
Five.
By late afternoon the peaceful campsite had become a crude defensive position. Looking at it should have embarrassed me. Instead, the obstacles and weapons gave me the illusion of control.
I ate early, secured loose equipment and kept the fire small. As darkness descended behind the ridge, I chambered a rifle round and settled with the weapon across my knees. A lawful deer stalk was one thing. Waiting in terror to shoot at unidentified shapes was something else entirely, and I knew it.
The disturbances began as soon as the light failed. There was no slow easing into silence this time. Rustling came from several directions, and each time I searched with the torch, its source shifted before the beam arrived.
I attached my night-vision optic and studied the trees through its green image.
That was when I saw clearly what had followed us.
Small, dark figures moved between trunks about 45 metres away. They travelled on two legs, but their proportions were not human. Their limbs were narrow and seemed to hinge at the wrong places. They slipped from tree to tree in coordinated patterns, several moving while another remained still.
I counted at least four.
They appeared to be studying the warning lines. One would approach, stop and tilt its head towards a hanging cup before retreating. Another came within 9 metres of the tent, its seven-toed feet spreading as it crouched, then withdrew into the conifers.
Through the optic I saw two of them gesture to one another with quick movements of their long hands. I could not tell whether it was language, but it was deliberate. They were responding to the changes I had made.
I tried to study their faces. They moved too quickly and kept to cover, but their bodies were roughly child-sized, with arms and legs that bent in ways my eye refused to accept.
When I aimed the torch towards them, they vanished.
They did not run. At the instant the light struck, the night vision showed empty woodland where several figures had stood a heartbeat before. There was no blur of retreat, no movement behind the trees. They were simply absent.
It happened repeatedly over the next few hours. Figures appeared through the optic, watched and repositioned, then blinked from view whenever the torch reached them. They adapted to each change in my attention.
Around midnight, three warning lines sounded almost together. Metal cups clattered from different sides of the clearing. When I swung the optic towards them, I saw nothing. Whatever had disturbed the lines had already gone.
The strain began to wear through me. The creatures were demonstrating that they could approach whenever they chose, trigger my alarms and disappear before I could respond. I thought they were testing me, learning the limits of my equipment and keeping me frightened without offering a target. That was an inference, but in the darkness it felt like certainty.
I remained at the rock throughout the night, rifle ready and eyes constantly moving. The harassment continued until shortly before dawn. Then the woodland fell quiet.
When the light strengthened, I made the rifle safe and began checking the perimeter. Fresh prints appeared inside several of my warning lines. One set crossed bare ground less than 4 metres from the porch without disturbing the nearest alarm.
What frightened me most was how cleanly they had done it.
The whole of 6 September, our fourth day, became an argument with myself. We had completed three nights in the glen, and each had been worse than the last. The sensible decision had been obvious after the first unexplained circuit of tracks: pack up and leave.
Instead I had allowed myself to become fixed on an adversary I could neither identify nor understand. Its behaviour resembled psychological pressure more than an attempt to attack, but even that might have been a story I imposed on it.
The new tracks were deeper, as if the creatures no longer cared whether I found them. Multiple sets showed coordinated movement and deliberate positions around the campsite. The change felt significant, though I could not say why.
Bracken had barely moved. He drank only when I carried water to him, ignored food and showed no interest in the woodland. His eyes looked dull and unfocused, as if they were fixed on something behind me.
I checked his breathing, gums and temperature several times and found no clear medical cause. Yet his personality was disappearing in front of me.
"Come on, boy," I said, trying once more to coax him upright. "Just walk to the burn with me."
He looked through me without recognition. There was no response to his name, no movement of his tail, none of the eager attention that defined him.
I should have left then. I should have carried or supported him back to the pickup and found the nearest vet.
Instead I spent hours strengthening the warning perimeter. I added more noise lines and adjusted obstacles to make the approaches easier to observe. I loaded the rifle magazine but left the chamber empty until dusk. The shotgun was assembled and secured beside the rock, cartridges close to hand. The bow rested nearby.
When I counted the arrows, there were only four.
I emptied the quiver and searched the ground. One carbon arrow and broadhead had vanished. I knew I had counted five the previous afternoon, and I had not fired any of them.
The missing arrow should have ended the argument. Something had entered the campsite, handled my equipment and taken it without sounding an alarm.
Still I remained.
The sun passed behind the ridge shortly after 19:30. I chambered a round and settled against the large rock with the rifle, torch and optic within reach. Bracken lay rigid in the porch. He did not appear asleep, but his eyes remained open and fixed on the darkness.
The laughter began before the last daylight had drained from the sky.
It was high and childlike, coming from several directions at once. Not the breathy conversation of the second night but a flawed imitation of children playing a counting game.
"One... two... four... one..."
Giggles followed, each arriving a fraction too late, as though something had learned the pattern without understanding why children laughed.
The sound tightened every muscle in my body. I raised the rifle and searched through the night-vision optic. Green shapes moved between the trees, but none remained exposed long enough for a clear identification, let alone a safe shot.
They travelled in quick, jerking motions, always behind cover or at the edge of visibility. The counting and laughter grew louder, echoing along the steep sides of the glen until it seemed that a whole playground had been hidden in the pines.
But nothing in it sounded alive. The pitch was close, the rhythm nearly right, yet every breath and pause came in the wrong place. It was laughter copied by something that did not know what amusement felt like.
Through the optic I caught glimpses of bodies moving as though they were still learning their own joints. Their actions were purposeful, but not natural. A figure would place one foot, hesitate, then swing its leg forwards with an exaggerated imitation of a human step.
Then I saw the eyes.
Two points of red light hovered between a pair of Scots pines about 45 metres away. They were not the ordinary reflection of an animal's eyes. Nothing shone from the surrounding bark or foliage, and the points remained a steady, ember-red while everything else moved around them.
They were looking directly at me.
I centred the crosshairs between them and held my breath. The range was easy. If the eyes belonged to a solid body, I could not have missed.
As I began to take up the trigger pressure, they vanished.
They did not duck or turn. At that exact instant, the space between the trees was empty.
The laughter resumed immediately, closer and unmistakably mocking. Whatever had watched me appeared to understand what I had attempted, and my failure had become part of its game.
The sound circled my position. One moment it came from behind the tent; the next it rose from the burn bank, less than 9 metres to my left.
"One... two... four... one..."
I swung the rifle towards each new voice, trying to bring the optic to bear before it moved. Every time I aligned with one source, the laughter stopped there and began somewhere else.
I could not catch it. I could not even prove the mouths producing it were attached to the figures I saw.
Behind me, Bracken remained unnaturally still in the porch.
The red eyes appeared again, much closer this time, perhaps 9 metres away, between two thick Scots pines where birch scrub and heather broke up the view. I swung the rifle towards them and fired before thought could catch up with panic.
The muzzle flash lit the woodland for an instant, and the crack rolled across the glen and came back from the slopes. The eyes blinked out at the exact moment of the flash. I worked the bolt, chambered another round and held the scope on the place where they had been.
There was nothing there but empty forest and the sharp smell of propellant. No blood. No movement. I could not even find a mark where the round had struck.
Then laughter burst out directly behind me, so close that I felt it like breath against the back of my neck.
I spun round with the rifle shouldered, but there was only darkness beyond the small fire. The sound rushed away through the trees, fading into the distance before returning from an entirely different direction.
It was playing with my reactions. Whatever was out there had watched me long enough to understand my equipment and the limits of my sight. It remained just beyond the places I could cover, appearing and disappearing at will, making me turn from one direction to another until I no longer knew where the greater threat lay.
The eyes appeared for a third time above a fallen trunk, about 12 metres away.
Through the scope I could make out a dark shape crouched behind them, roughly the size suggested by the prints I had found. It was too small to be an adult human and too large to be any pine marten or badger I had ever seen. I settled the crosshairs, allowing for the slight downward angle.
My breathing slowed out of old habit. Shoulder firm, cheek against the stock, finger taking up the pressure. The movements came back from years of training even while every sensible part of me screamed that nothing about this was a legitimate shot.
I fired.
The shape blinked out with the muzzle flash. It did not duck or run. One instant it was framed in the scope, and the next there was nothing there. The round struck the fallen trunk and tore away a pale burst of rotten wood.
The flawed children's laughter began at once, coming from several directions. It had the rhythm of a counting game, but the numbers were wrong and the voices entered at the wrong moments, as though the creatures had heard children playing without understanding what the game was for. Echoes off trunks and exposed rock multiplied the sound until I could not tell whether there was one of them or a dozen.
I fired a third time towards the loudest voice, although I had no visible target.
It was a blind warning shot into woodland, a reckless and unlawful act born of terror. I knew that even as I squeezed the trigger. The round vanished into the darkness, and silence followed.
For several seconds the forest was utterly still.
Then the laughter started again, quieter but more sustained. It continued for hours, sometimes dwindling to faint giggles beneath the rush of the burn, sometimes rising into shrieks that hurt my ears.
There was no pattern I could anticipate. Each pause lasted just long enough for me to wonder whether it had ended. Every shadow became a crouching figure. Every scrape of branch or movement in the heather brought the rifle round towards a new patch of darkness. Again and again the night-vision optic showed me empty woodland, but I knew I was being watched.
The pressure was more effective than a direct attack. By midnight the laughter had stopped coming from beyond my perimeter and begun sounding from inside the campsite.
First it came from beside the tent porch. Then from the existing stone scar where the fire burned low. Then from the place where Bracken lay rigid and motionless.
Each time I aimed, I saw only my own kit and the husky's pale shape. Bracken did not react. He did not lift his head when the laughter came from beside his body.
The realisation that the things could pass through my defences made my hands shake around the rifle. The line alarms, obstacles and careful fields of view meant nothing against something that did not obey the rules I understood.
I spent the rest of the night switching between the rifle, the shotgun and the bow. I checked angles that should have exposed anything approaching the camp, but the laughter continued to rise from places where the optic showed empty ground. Every attempt to defend myself became part of the joke.
The harassment lasted until the first grey light of dawn filtered between the pines. Only then did the laughter recede, leaving the ordinary calls of waking birds and the steady water over stones.
I had fired far more ammunition than I could justify, exhausted myself completely and lost any belief that I could fight what lived in that glen.
As daylight strengthened, I made the rifle safe and lowered it. I tried to make sense of the four nights since my arrival on 3 September 2026. First the rustling. Then the seven-toed prints. The whispers. The visible figures. Now the laughter inside my defences and the impossible disappearance at each muzzle flash.
Whatever the beings were, they showed intelligence and coordination. They had studied me, learnt which sounds pulled my attention and increased the pressure until I was barely functioning.
I looked at Bracken. He remained in the same place in the tent porch where he had settled the previous evening.
He had not moved during the entire night of gunfire and laughter. He had not raised his head when the sound came from within a metre of him. Whatever was happening, my dog had become part of it.
My hands would not stop shaking as I began to break camp.
Four nights had pushed me beyond my limit. The only rational response left was to get out of the glen as quickly as I could.
I went through the familiar packing routine as if someone else were controlling my arms. The tent folded into its bag. The sleeping bag rolled tight and clipped to the rucksack. I stacked the stove and cooking gear and wrapped the metal pieces in a tea towel so they would not clatter on the walk out.
I moved quickly, desperate to put distance between myself and whatever had followed me through the dark. I took down the line alarms and collected the obstacles I had arranged around the site. Pots and pegs knocked together as I shoved them into the rucksack, but in daylight the sound was reassuring. It was ordinary kit making an ordinary noise, not laughter coming from empty ground.
When I reached for the bow case, I checked the compact quiver attached to it. I had packed five carbon arrows for target practice and knew the count precisely.
There were four.
The missing one was the best of the set, fitted with a mechanical broadhead I had bought abroad and kept for collection and range testing, not for use on British wildlife. The shaft and head together had cost nearly GBP 40.
I searched the grass around the tent. I checked beside the rock where I had kept watch and beneath the edge of the groundsheet. The arrow had not fallen out. It was simply gone.
Something had crossed my perimeter while I was awake and armed. While I had been staring into the trees and firing at red eyes, it had come close enough to handle my equipment.
I forced myself to continue packing, checking every item twice. Exhaustion made the rucksack feel impossibly heavy, and Bracken's condition meant I might need both hands free to manage him. I put the bow case, quiver and some non-essential camping gear into a small lockable equipment box I had brought for the pickup's load bed. I secured the box beneath a rock overhang well above the burn, intending to retrieve it once Bracken was safe. The lock clicked shut, and I tested it twice.
The firearms were not something I would leave behind. I unloaded the rifle, checked the chamber and returned it to its slip. I did the same with the shotgun and secured both for transport. If a specific threat appeared on the path, I could take one out and load it, but I was not walking through public access land with a chambered rifle in my hands.
"Bracken," I called as I shouldered the rucksack and adjusted the straps for the three-hour walk back to the forestry car park. "Come on, boy. Time to go."
There was no response from the tent porch.
I turned, expecting to find him stretched out in the same exhausted sprawl he had adopted the day before.
He was sitting upright.
There was something wrong with the posture. Bracken normally sat with his weight relaxed over his haunches, ready to spring up at the first sign of a walk. Now his spine was perfectly straight and every part of him was motionless.
"Bracken, let's move. Pack-up time."
I used the firm command voice that had always brought his immediate attention.
He turned his head towards me.
His eyes were still the same bright blue I had known for five years, but the expression behind them had vanished. There was no recognition of his name and no excitement at the sight of the packed rucksack. He stared through me as if he were watching something beyond my shoulder.
I approached cautiously, looking for signs of illness or injury. His breathing appeared regular. I saw no blood, swelling or obvious pain, but the way he held himself was wrong. Too rigid. Too deliberate. It looked like an imitation of a dog sitting still, performed by something that had only recently learnt the pose.
"What's wrong with you, boy?"
I crouched a couple of metres away and extended one hand for him to smell, the way I would approach any frightened or injured animal.
"Are you feeling all right?"
His head tilted. The movement came in small, separate jerks, stopping and starting as if each adjustment required conscious thought. Bracken had always moved with the effortless balance of a husky. No dog moved like this.
I took his red lead from the rucksack. Whatever was wrong, I needed to get him to a vet once we reached the nearest town.
"Come here, Bracken. Let's get you home."
The sound from his throat stopped me.
It was not a bark, whine or growl. It was a low guttural vibration that seemed to come from somewhere too deep inside him, and it made my teeth ache.
The noise continued for several seconds, changing pitch and texture. His lips drew back, but not in any normal snarl. His jaw opened too far, exposing more gum than I should have been able to see. Several tones moved through the sound at once, as though different voices were attempting to speak through the same throat.
I stepped back, still holding the lead but no longer considering moving closer.
This was not my dog. At least, that was what terror told me. Whatever watched me through those blue eyes understood my confusion and seemed amused by it.
The noises continued. At moments they almost resembled words in a language I could not place. Then they broke into hard clicks, like damaged machinery. The pattern suggested something trying to produce speech with a mouth that had never been designed for it.
"Bracken," I said once more, desperate to reach anything of him that remained. "It's me, boy. It's Callum."
The thing stood.
Each leg moved separately, with the same stop-start control I had seen in its neck. It took one step towards me, and I saw no confusion or animal instinct in its eyes. There was only a cold attention, watching my response and learning from it.
I believed then that something had taken Bracken over. I had no evidence beyond fear, exhaustion and the impossible movements in front of me, but the belief arrived whole and absolute. In my mind, my dog was gone and an intelligence from the forest was using his body.
It seemed to me that the creatures had watched him for days, studying his behaviour and waiting until they could turn the companion I trusted most into another weapon against me.
I backed away, keeping my eyes on the husky-shaped thing. My hands found the rifle slip, but I did not open it. I could not shoot while the animal still wore Bracken's face, and I could not risk loading a firearm merely because panic had convinced me of something I could not prove.
The sound became louder and more insistent. It was not Bracken's voice, though it came from the same throat that had once greeted me whenever I returned to my flat.
I decided I had to leave him.
The choice tore through me, but in that moment I saw no other way. I could not fight what I thought was inside him. I could not treat it, command it or reason with it. I could not safely attach the lead and bring it close.
I turned my back on the thing that looked like Bracken and stepped onto the hill path leading towards the car park and the ordinary world beyond the glen.
The rucksack dragged at my shoulders. My boots struck the packed earth too loudly in the morning quiet. Every step took me farther from five years of loyalty and companionship, farther from the closest friend I had.
Pain tightened across my chest with every metre, but I kept walking. Leaving felt like the only choice that made sense. That did not make it feel any less like betrayal.
The path climbed through Scots pine and birch, following the same route I had taken four days earlier when everything had still been normal. I crossed the same fallen trunks and picked through the same patches of loose stone, but the forest felt altered now. I sensed attention behind every tree.
I had been walking for about twenty minutes when the first howl came from behind me.
It carried across the glen and rebounded from the slopes, making distance impossible to judge. It began like Bracken's voice, the bark-howl he used when he caught an interesting scent or wanted my attention. But the pitch and rhythm were wrong, like an imitation made after hearing a poor recording once.
I stopped and listened, hoping I had imagined it.
The howl came again, longer this time. It wavered through notes no dog's throat should have produced, climbing too high and dropping too low. The same vibration that had accompanied the guttural sounds at camp set my teeth aching.
My hand went instinctively towards the rifle slip, but I left it secured. The source was out of sight and not an immediate identifiable threat. I needed to keep moving.
The howling followed as I walked, always behind me and apparently no nearer. Sometimes it sounded almost like Bracken, close enough to awaken a rush of hope. At other times it dissolved into mechanical warbling that belonged in a broken radio rather than a living throat.
I forced myself into a steady pace, breathing evenly and putting one foot in front of the other. Army training had taught me to continue moving under distraction, but this was not gunfire or the noise of an exercise in the Brecon Beacons. It was something using my dog's voice to call me back.
The objective was simple: reach the pickup, load my kit and drive away. I repeated those tasks in my head while the sounds behind me became more desperate and more wrong.
The path steepened towards the rounded ridge separating the glen from the broader valley. The rucksack straps bit into my shoulders, and sweat soaked my shirt despite the cool air around 900 metres above sea level. The physical strain gave me something real to concentrate on.
Halfway up the ridge, the howling changed.
The sound became more complex. It remained artificial, but there were patterns within it now. Syllables almost formed words. A rhythm emerged that resembled conversation, as if something were trying to call my name without remembering how human speech worked.
I stopped and looked back down the path.
There was nothing visible between the trunks but shadow, heather and blaeberry. Yet the sound continued from somewhere close enough that I felt I ought to see its source.
Whatever followed me remained just beyond sight, practising speech through the voice it had copied. The thought made my skin crawl. Each attempt was slightly different, as though it were testing combinations and measuring which one drew the strongest reaction.
I turned away and continued climbing. The crest was less than 100 metres above me. Once I reached it, the main valley and the route towards the pickup would lie ahead.
Keep moving. Do not think about what is behind you. Get home.
The howling grew more insistent as I climbed. It came faster and with greater variation, using tones that pulled at something deep inside my chest. By the time I reached the crest, it sounded almost human.
Not words, but close enough that my mind kept trying to make words from it. At times it resembled my name drawn out over impossible syllables. At others it sounded like pleading, as though an injured creature were begging for help.
I knew it was manipulation. It was using my attachment to Bracken because that attachment was the surest way to turn me round.
Knowing that did not make it easier to resist. Every false whimper made me wonder whether fear and exhaustion had distorted what I had seen at camp. Perhaps Bracken was ill, terrified and calling for me. Perhaps I had abandoned him when he needed me most.
The rational part of my mind rejected the possibility. I had seen the rigid posture, heard the layered noises and watched the mechanical way he moved. The emotional part remembered five years of trust and insisted that I might be making the worst mistake of my life.
I descended the far side of the ridge, taking care on loose stone and steep turns. The howling continued, but the ridge muffled it. Distance made the sounds easier to dismiss as wind moving through the conifers.
The path levelled in the main valley and followed a burn that would eventually lead towards the forestry car park. I had roughly two hours left, perhaps less if I maintained a hard pace. I could reach the pickup by noon and be on the surfaced B-road before the afternoon.
Then the howling stopped.
The silence troubled me more than the noise. While the thing called, I had at least a rough sense of where it was. Now I knew nothing about its position or intention.
I kept walking but glanced over my shoulder every few minutes. The empty path showed only woodland and rock. Morning birds called from the canopy, and red squirrels moved through the branches, yet the absence of pursuit felt like the pause before something worse.
The burn widened as smaller streams joined it from side glens. Its noise covered my footsteps but also concealed anything that might have been following. I stopped repeatedly to listen and searched the woodland edge for movement.
An hour passed without another sign. Then a second. The forest began to feel ordinary again, full of birds and small animals objecting to my presence.
I started to believe I had put enough distance between myself and whatever I had left at camp.
By the time I saw the car park through the trees, my legs were unsteady and my shoulders ached beneath the straps. Three hours of walking under that strain had taken more from me than a normal day-long trek.
Relief washed through me when I saw my four-wheel-drive pickup exactly where I had left it on 3 September.
I stumbled into the small rutted clearing beside the timber path sign and access gate. I dropped the rucksack by the driver's door and fumbled for my keys.
Everything appeared normal. The same tyre marks crossed the mud. The same pine needles lay across the windscreen. There was no sign that anything had disturbed the vehicle.
I unlocked the load bed and began stowing my kit. The rucksack went in first, followed by the secured rifle and shotgun slips. Each item felt like another step back into a world where objects behaved according to rules I understood.
I shut the tailgate, climbed into the cab and started the engine. It caught on the first turn, the familiar rumble sounding better than music.
I pulled away, gravel snapping beneath the tyres. My eyes moved automatically to the rear-view mirror as the car park vanished behind the first rise and the trees closed across my view.
I kept checking anyway.
About three kilometres of rough forestry track separated me from the surfaced B-road. I drove faster than the conditions warranted, taking bends too sharply and striking ruts hard enough to jar my teeth. The pickup absorbed the punishment and carried me away from the upland forest.
At the junction with the B-road, I stopped and looked back once more.
The track lay empty between green walls of conifer. Nothing had followed me from the car park. There was no movement, no howl and no flash of blue eyes.
The silence still felt wrong. After four nights of escalating harassment and hours of warped calls following me through the forest, the sudden absence of contact felt like a held breath.
I turned towards the A9 and drove south, checking the mirrors every few seconds. The farther I travelled from the Cairngorms, the more ordinary the world became. Other vehicles passed. Hill farms, grazing land and scattered estates appeared beside the road. Villages gave way to larger towns, and eventually the traffic thickened towards Edinburgh.
The familiar world was still there, operating according to rules that made sense. Yet I could not shake the feeling that I had left something unfinished in the glen.
The silence behind me felt like a promise.
Three full days at home wore me down. By the evening of 10 September 2026, I sat at the kitchen table in my Edinburgh flat with a cold mug of coffee, staring at my mobile and trying to persuade myself that what I had done was necessary.
The logical part of my mind repeated the same arguments. The thing at camp had not been Bracken any longer. Leaving had been the only safe choice. There had been nothing I could do to help him.
Logic did not help me sleep.
Whenever I closed my eyes, I saw those blue eyes watching me with intelligence that did not belong behind them. I heard the clicks from his throat and watched his limbs move with broken precision. In my mind, something had taken everything that made Bracken my companion and fashioned it into a weapon designed to hurt me.
Underneath every explanation lay a simpler truth.
I had abandoned my dog.
He had given me five years of loyalty and trust. When he needed me most, I had turned my back and walked away. Believing that something else controlled his body did not erase the betrayal.
The flat was too quiet without claws crossing the wooden floors or the soft huff Bracken made when he settled for a sleep. His bowls remained beside the kitchen doorway. The water dish was still half full because I could not bring myself to empty it. His favourite tennis ball lay beneath the coffee table, bright yellow against the dark wood where he had left it before the trip.
I picked up the mobile and scrolled to Euan MacLeod's number.
Euan was the only person I could call about something like this. He was the one friend I trusted to hear that I needed help before demanding an explanation I could not yet give.
He answered on the second ring.
"Callum, what's happened?"
"I need your help with something."
My voice sounded rough from three days of speaking to almost no one.
"It's Bracken."
"Your dog? What's wrong?"
I had rehearsed the conversation dozens of times, trying to find words that would secure Euan's help without making me sound delusional.
"He became ill on the camping trip. Badly ill. I had to leave him up there, and now I need to go back for him."
Silence held at the other end of the call. Euan was listening for what I had not said, the way we had both learnt to do during our service.
"How ill are we talking?"
"As in... he might need to be put down."
"Right."
The lie came more easily than I expected.
"I couldn't carry him out, and he was suffering. I did what I thought I had to do, but I can't leave him there."
"Where is there?"
"A remote glen on the eastern edge of the Cairngorms. About three hours north by road, then roughly three hours on foot. The last section is a forestry track. We'll need your pickup."
Euan paused again. He knew I did not ask for help lightly, especially for something requiring a full day of driving and walking.
"When?"
"Tomorrow morning."
"All right. I'll collect you at 06:00. Bring whatever kit you need."
Relief loosened something in my chest.
"Thanks, Euan. I owe you."
"You don't. See you in the morning."
He ended the call without pressing for details. That was why I had called him. Ten years in the British Army had taught us both that sometimes you went back for your people even when the purpose was dangerous, painful or difficult to explain.
I spent the remainder of the evening preparing for the return. My rucksack still stood near the door where I had dropped it three days earlier. The rifle slip leaned against the wall, the weapon cleaned, checked and secured. The shotgun remained locked away because I saw no lawful reason to bring it back. If I encountered an immediate threat to life, the stalking rifle would be enough for any ordinary Highland animal, though I knew no native animal fitted what I had seen.
I considered calling Police Scotland on 101. I even entered the number, then deleted it. What could I report? Child-sized beings that disappeared with the flash of a rifle? A dog that seemed occupied by something intelligent? I imagined being told to contact a vet, or local mountain rescue being asked to risk volunteers on the strength of a story I could barely believe myself.
If Bracken were alive and suffering, perhaps I should have requested help. If there were an immediate threat to life, I should have called 999. Instead I let shame and fear persuade me that I had to deal with it privately. It was frightened, morally compromised judgement, though I did not admit that to myself at the time.
The night passed without sleep. Each time I drifted off, the broken howling returned in my dreams, Bracken's voice stretching into something mechanical and wrong.
By 05:00 on 11 September, I was waiting outside the entrance to the stairwell with my kit. Euan's battered diesel pickup arrived at 06:00, its all-terrain tyres humming on the wet street and the front winch speckled with old mud.
He climbed out wearing walking boots, cargo trousers and a faded checked shirt beneath a weatherproof jacket. His face looked more lined than I remembered. He had brought no firearm, only a sturdy hill knife packed with his emergency kit.
"Morning," he said, taking my rucksack and rifle slip before I could object. He looked me over. "You look dreadful."
"I feel worse."
I secured the kit in the load bed and climbed into the passenger seat.
"Thanks for doing this."
"Don't mention it. Where are we going?"
I gave him the route as he pulled away. We crossed Edinburgh through the morning traffic, continued over the M90 and joined the A9 before turning onto smaller Highland roads. From the B-road, an estate road and roughly three kilometres of forestry track would take us to the car park. After that, we faced another three hours on foot.
Euan kept the conversation light during the first hour. He talked about work and mutual friends from our former unit, choosing ordinary subjects that gave me room to think. A classic-rock station played quietly on the DAB radio, loud enough to fill the silences without forcing either of us to raise our voices.
As we travelled north, urban edges gave way to grazing land, hill farms and scattered estates. Then the rounded ridges and corries of the Cairngorms rose ahead of us. Scots pine and commercial conifers enclosed the road, and cool air from the vents carried the damp scent of upland forest.
Under any other circumstances, I would have enjoyed the drive.
That morning it felt like travelling towards an execution.
"What really happened up there?" Euan asked when we turned onto the rough forestry track. His tone was casual, but concern sat beneath it. "And don't give me yesterday's version. I know you, Callum. You don't abandon animals. Especially not Bracken."
I stared through the side window at the pines, birches and rowans passing outside. In daylight they looked entirely normal, giving no sign of what I had endured beneath them.
"He became ill. He stopped behaving like himself. By the fourth day he wasn't responding to his name or basic commands."
"Could the elevation have affected him?"
"Perhaps."
I let the suggestion stand, although terrain around 900 metres should not have transformed a healthy husky into what I had seen.
"Whatever happened, he didn't feel like my dog any more. There was something wrong with the way he looked at me."
Euan nodded, but I could tell he heard the gaps. Our service had taught both of us to spot inconsistencies, and my account was full of them. He was also wise enough to recognise that I was not ready to fill them.
The track climbed beside a burn through a narrowing glen. Euan's pickup coped well with the ruts, pitching over the worst of them. We passed two vehicles travelling downhill, both driven by forestry workers who lifted a hand in greeting.
"How much farther?" Euan asked as the gradient steepened and he selected four-wheel drive.
"About another kilometre to the car park. Then three hours on foot."
"Three hours each way, plus whatever we're doing when we arrive. That's a long day."
"I know."
I checked the dashboard clock. It was 08:30. At a steady pace, we would reach the campsite around noon, leaving enough daylight for the return if nothing delayed us.
The car park appeared beyond the next bend, exactly as I remembered it: a small rutted space cut into the trees, large enough for five or six vehicles. A timber sign marked the hill path beside an access gate. Notices from Forestry and Land Scotland covered responsible access, deer stalking, forestry operations, ticks and wildfire risk.
Euan parked beside the sign and switched off the engine. Silence settled around us while the diesel ticked as it cooled.
Through the windscreen I could see the narrow path disappearing among the trees, following the route I had walked on 7 September with the false howls behind me. In the clear morning light, it looked like any other remote Highland path.
"Are you sure about this?" Euan asked, studying my face. "We could ring Police Scotland on 101 and ask for advice. If the dog is injured or dangerous, we could also speak to the local mountain rescue team before going in."
"No."
The answer came out sharper than I intended.
"This is something I need to do myself."
Euan held my gaze for a moment, plainly unconvinced. Then he opened his door.
"All right. Your decision. But if there's an immediate danger, we call 999. No argument."
We spent ten minutes preparing. We checked water, food, first-aid supplies, torches, spare batteries, maps and waterproofs. Euan adjusted the straps of his rucksack. I checked that the rifle remained unloaded and secured in its slip. Its ammunition travelled separately until there was a specific, identifiable need for it.
I shouldered my rucksack and started along the path with Euan behind me.
The familiar rhythm of walking steadied my nerves. The forest felt different with another person present, less oppressive and more like ordinary woodland than the hostile place I remembered. Birds called between the pines. Red squirrels moved high in the branches, and unseen animals rustled through heather as we passed.
"Beautiful country," Euan said as we crossed a narrow burn on a fallen trunk. "I haven't been this far into the hills for a while."
"It is beautiful."
I watched the path ahead for familiar rocks, fallen trees and turns that would tell me how far we had travelled.
"Usually peaceful too."
Euan gave a short laugh.
"Usually? What happened? Did you meet some unfriendly locals?"
"Something like that."
I did not elaborate, and he did not press me. We climbed steadily through Scots pine and birch, following the winding path as it gained height around the steep side of the glen.
We followed the same hill path I had taken out four days earlier, only in reverse and with company that made everything feel safer. The first hour passed without incident. Then the second. Euan kept up a stream of easy conversation, commenting on the scenery and telling stories about walking trips he had taken over the years.
His voice filled the silence that had felt so threatening the last time I was among those trees.
"You know what this reminds me of?" he said as we approached the ridge separating the side glen from the main valley. "That exercise in the Brecon Beacons. Three days out with next to no kit, trying to avoid the aggressor force. Remember?"
The exercise had been designed to test our survival skills and our ability to operate behind enemy lines. We had spent most of it cold, hungry and convinced that the opposing force was about to find us.
"This is a lot more comfortable," Euan said.
"Speak for yourself. I had a sleeping bag that time."
We reached the rounded top of the ridge and descended into the glen where I had spent four nights being slowly driven out of my mind by things that should not have existed. The woodland looked exactly as it had when I escaped on 7 September: Scots pine and birch giving way to darker stands of commercial conifers, with rowan scattered among them and heather and blaeberry beneath. There was no sign of what I had endured.
But the spaces between the trees were too quiet.
It felt as though the animals were avoiding the place for reasons they could not understand. Euan noticed it as well, although he tried to give it an ordinary explanation.
"Not much bird activity down here," he observed as we descended towards the burn that would lead us to my former campsite. "Probably our scent keeping them away. This path gets a fair bit of traffic in season."
I nodded but said nothing. The absence of wildlife troubled me more than it should have, stirring instincts I had developed during ten years in the Army. Every shadow between the trunks suggested concealed movement. Every breath of wind through the pine needles sounded like something I needed to locate.
Euan either failed to notice my tension or chose not to mention it. He kept up a relaxed pace, occasionally stopping to examine an unusual stone or point out red-deer tracks in the damp ground beside the burn. It was the sort of ordinary interest any hillwalker might show, and it helped disguise how frightened I was becoming of whatever might lie ahead.
The final hour dragged. Each familiar landmark brought us closer to the place where I had abandoned what I thought was Bracken: the fallen pine where I had rested on my first walk in, the great lichen-covered boulder halfway between the ridge and the camping site, and the bend in the burn where I had caught two brown trout with the estate's permission on my second day.
Everything looked as it should. Yet the sense of wrongness grew stronger, pressing behind my eyes like the beginning of a migraine. Something had changed since my departure. The differences were too subtle to identify, but too important to dismiss.
"How much farther?" Euan asked as we rounded another bend in the path.
"About fifteen minutes. The site's in a clearing just ahead."
My mouth was dry despite the cool Highland air.
That was when the smell reached us.
It travelled down the glen on the breeze, following the burn from somewhere ahead: sweet, cloying and utterly wrong. It was the unmistakable smell of death and decay, and both of us recognised it at once.
Euan stopped and raised his head, testing the air. His hand moved instinctively towards the secured shotgun slung across his chest, though he did not touch the action.
"Christ," he muttered. "How long did you say you left him up there?"
"Four days."
The smell was far stronger than I would have expected from one dog's body in the cool weather. My stomach tightened as possibilities crowded into my mind, each worse than the last. Euan's easy manner vanished. His face settled into the alert, guarded expression I remembered from deployments.
"We should call this in," he said. "Police Scotland on 101, at least. Ask mountain rescue for advice if we need help getting him out. Let people who know what they're doing handle whatever's up there."
"No."
I started walking again and forced myself towards the source of the stench.
"We're here now. We may as well finish what we came to do."
It was pride, guilt and exhaustion speaking, not training. Every useful instinct I possessed was telling me to turn round and leave the glen as quickly as possible.
The smell strengthened with every step.
The clearing appeared much as I had left it, except for the horror at its centre. The existing stone scar where I had kept my small fire contained was still filled with cold ash. The flattened patch where my tent had stood remained visible in the grass, but there were no obvious signs that another person had visited. Parts of my crude perimeter still lay among the heather: dead branches and small piles of stones positioned to make a noise if anything approached.
About six metres from the edge of the clearing, Euan stopped.
"Callum, I don't like this."
I continued. Guilt pushed me forwards. For three full days at home I had wondered what had become of Bracken, and for three nights I had barely slept, haunted by those unnatural howls. However badly I wanted to run, I had come back to face what I had done.
The body lay in the precise centre of the clearing.
At first I could not understand what I was seeing. The shape was too flat and spread too widely to be a sleeping dog. But the grey-and-white coat was Bracken's. Even through the damage, I recognised every marking.
Something had opened him from throat to tail with dreadful precision.
I stopped. My hands began to shake as the full extent of the mutilation resolved itself before me.
Scavengers had not done this. Neither had red deer, feral goats, badgers or pine martens. The cuts were too clean and deliberate. Something that understood anatomy had worked on him carefully and taken its time.
Bracken's organs had been removed and placed around his body at exact compass points. His heart lay to the north, his liver to the south, and the other organs had been positioned to the east and west with measured symmetry. It was an arrangement, not the remains of feeding.
"Jesus Christ," Euan whispered as he came alongside me.
The colour had drained from his face. I could hear the change in his breathing.
"What the hell did this?"
I could not answer. For five years Bracken had been my closest companion. Now I was staring at pieces of him arranged on the grass by something that had wanted the scene to be found.
"Someone did this deliberately," Euan said. "This is ritualistic."
He took out his mobile.
"I'm calling 101. Police Scotland need to see it. If they think specialist investigators are required, they can bring them in."
"No."
I caught his wrist and pushed the phone down.
He stared at me. "Have you lost your mind? Look at him, Callum. Something butchered your dog and laid out his organs. We cannot simply walk away."
I understood his reaction. I also knew that no account I gave the police could explain what had happened. How could I describe four nights of whispers and flawed children's laughter? How could I tell an officer that figures with red eyes had blinked out of sight at the instant my weapons flashed, or that Bracken had stood rigid in the clearing and made dry clicking sounds that no dog could produce?
"Think about what we'll have to tell them," I said. My voice sounded distant in my own ears. "They'll ask why we came back armed. They'll ask why I abandoned him when he was ill. They'll see the barriers and the equipment cache. Then I'll have to explain the things I fired at and the reckless warning shots. What exactly do you expect a detective to make of that?"
"They might make more of it than two frightened idiots contaminating the scene."
He was right, and we both knew it. Calling was the proper thing to do. But fear had narrowed my judgement until all I could imagine was an investigation, the firearms questions and the certainty that no one would believe the part that mattered.
Euan studied me for several seconds.
"We could still request advice from mountain rescue," he said. "Or call 999 if that thing appears and there is an immediate threat."
"I know."
"And you still want to handle this ourselves?"
I nodded.
He swore under his breath and put the mobile away.
"Fine. But this is a bloody awful decision, and we're not staying a moment longer than necessary. Whatever did this may still be here."
I made myself approach the body, searching the scene for anything that might tell me what had happened after I fled. The cuts appeared to have been made by something capable of controlled, hand-like movements, not by teeth or claws.
Then I saw what surrounded the organs, and I stopped dead.
Five carbon arrows had been driven into the earth in the form of an exact five-pointed star, with Bracken's remains at its centre. Each broadhead had been forced so deeply into the ground that only the black shafts and fletching remained visible.
They were mine.
One was the carbon target arrow and broadhead for which I had paid nearly GBP 40, the arrow that had vanished while I was awake and watching the camp. The other four had been inside the locked equipment cache I had left behind when Bracken's condition and my exhaustion forced me into that frantic departure.
The cache stood at the edge of the clearing. Its lid was open. The lock and casing showed no mark, no cut and no sign that either had been forced.
"Those are yours?" Euan asked.
"Yes."
My answer was barely audible.
"One disappeared before I left. The other four were locked in that cache."
The implication struck harder than the sight of the arrows. The beings had not merely stolen from the edge of my camp. One of them had come through my defences while I sat about nine metres away with a rifle across my knees. It had been close enough to touch me or kill me, yet it had chosen to take a single object and wait. Then, after I had gone, it had opened a locked box without damaging it and retrieved the rest.
Euan crouched beside one of the arrows without touching it.
"These weren't placed at random. Look at the distances and the angles. Something measured this."
He was right. Each shaft occupied the exact position required to form the star. The precision was beyond chance and beyond any native animal.
A worse thought came to me.
"It was studying me."
Euan rose slowly. "What was?"
"The thing that did this. The things in the trees. They weren't only trying to frighten me away or protect territory. They learnt my habits, my kit and my weaknesses."
I pointed towards the arrows and the untouched lock.
"They watched me prepare the rifle and shotgun. They knew where I kept the ammunition. They knew when I slept and when I was watching. They knew which arrow would matter enough for me to notice it was gone."
Euan's hand returned to the sling of his shotgun.
"Studying you for what?"
"I don't know."
The arrangement offered no answer, only evidence of planning. During my escape I had believed that something had entered Bracken and taken control of him. The body in front of me proved that could not have been the whole truth.
Bracken had died here before I left.
I could not tell when. The cool September weather might have slowed the decay, but deliberate exposure and the extensive mutilation had strengthened the smell. At some point during those four nights, while the real Bracken lay dead or hidden somewhere beyond my sight, another thing had taken his place in the tent porch. It had copied his coat and his shape. It had imitated the movements it had observed, although never quite correctly. It had lacked his familiar scent. It had stood too rigidly, turned its head in unnatural increments and barked a fraction too late, as though matching sound to action by calculation.
The creature I had abandoned on the morning of 7 September had not been my dog. The howls that pursued me through the forest had not come from Bracken either.
Whatever the beings wanted, their harassment had not been random predation. It had felt more like reconnaissance, a long examination conducted at close range. They had suppressed Bracken, replaced him and watched me through a copy wearing his face.
"We need to bury him," I said. I could no longer bear to look at the remains. "I can't leave him like this."
Euan's expression hardened.
"We should preserve the scene and call the police. You know that."
"I know."
"But you won't?"
I shook my head.
He glanced into the silent trees, then nodded once, frightened and unwilling.
"There's a folding spade in my rucksack. We do it on higher ground, well away from the burn."
We chose a place among the pines above the clearing, far enough from the water that the grave could not contaminate it. The soil was tangled with roots and stones, and it took more than an hour to dig deeply enough to discourage scavengers.
Neither of us spoke much. We concentrated on the physical work because it was easier than thinking about what we were doing, or about the evidence we were destroying through cowardice.
Gathering the remains was the worst of it. I forced myself to collect every part, including each organ from its compass point. I would not let Euan do the task alone. Bracken had been my responsibility, and I had failed to protect him. The least I could do was place him in the earth with some care.
When the grave was filled, we covered it with heavy stones. Euan then returned to the clearing and pulled the five arrows from the ground. He wiped the soil from the shafts and handed them to me without comment. The broadheads were undamaged, but I could not imagine using them again. I wrapped the arrows together and secured them to the outside of my rucksack.
"Ready to get out of here?" Euan asked.
I took one final look around the clearing where I had spent four nights being dismantled by fear. Once the remains and arrows were gone, it looked ordinary again: a discreet wild-camping site in a remote Cairngorm glen, surrounded by Scots pine, birch and heather. Nothing visible remained of the horror that had taken place there. There was no proof that coordinated, intelligent things had used the clearing for a purpose I could not understand.
"Yes," I said. "Let's go."
We walked back to the forestry car park in silence. Euan set a punishing pace and I made no objection. For roughly three hours we moved through woodland that seemed to be watching us, over the ridge and down the remote hill path towards the access gate.
By the time we reached Euan's battered diesel pickup, the sun was sinking behind the rounded Cairngorm ridges. We loaded our rucksacks and secured the firearms and remaining kit, then began the journey home: about three kilometres along the rough forestry track, on to the surfaced B-road, then towards the A9 and the long road south to Edinburgh.
Euan left the DAB radio switched off. Neither of us wanted music or conversation after what we had seen.
As the glens gave way to hill farms, grazing land and scattered estates, a new fear took hold of me.
Somewhere behind us, among those trees, something might still be walking around in Bracken's shape.
The body in the grave proved that the husky I had seen on my final morning was a separate creature. It had watched Bracken for long enough to reproduce him almost perfectly. It had copied the grey-and-white pattern of his coat, the set of his ears and the way he carried his tail. It had learnt his bark well enough to deceive someone who had known him for five years.
Almost perfectly.
Other walkers would enter that glen. Fair-weather walkers with pristine kit, experienced hill-goers, couples with dogs, and families with children. One of them might find what appeared to be a friendly Siberian husky waiting beside the path. It might wag its tail and approach with the hesitant hopefulness of a lost pet. They might offer it food, clip a spare lead to its collar or invite it close to their camp.
By the time they noticed that it had no proper scent, that its paws touched the ground at the wrong angle, or that its bark came a fraction after its jaws moved, it might already be too late.
I stared through the passenger window as darkness gathered beyond the glass. I thought of other walkers, other dogs and other companions who trusted completely and deserved better than Bracken's fate. I could not warn them without explaining everything. I had refused the only official report that might have placed a warning on the path, and an anonymous story about child-sized figures and a copied dog would be dismissed as nonsense.
All I could do was hope that the next people who saw the friendly-looking husky waiting beside the Highland path would notice its mistakes before they invited it close.