Roads & Towns
The Hunger Beneath the Cairngorms
The phone rang while I was staring at my laptop, watching the cursor blink in an empty job application form. It was the third one that week. Callum Fraser's name appeared on the screen, and I almost let it ring out. Conversations with friends from my days in the Highland Council countryside ranger service usually ended in awkward silences about why I no longer worked in the field.
The phone rang while I was staring at my laptop, watching the cursor blink in an empty job application form. It was the third one that week. Callum Fraser's name appeared on the screen, and I almost let it ring out. Conversations with friends from my days in the Highland Council countryside ranger service usually ended in awkward silences about why I no longer worked in the field.
'Hello, stranger.'
His voice had the familiar warmth that made anyone feel as though they had just bumped into a favourite cousin. 'Got a minute to talk business?'
I closed the laptop. 'Depends what sort of business.'
'The paying sort. GBP 4,500 for a week's work.'
That caught my attention. I had been surviving on freelance environmental consultancy jobs that barely covered the rent, never mind the overdraft and solicitor's fees left by my divorce.
'I'm listening.'
'Remember the guiding and stalking business I've been trying to get off the ground? I've landed a serious booking. Three London business types want a full week of red-deer stalking on a private Highland estate.'
'And the problem is?'
'They specifically asked for someone with proper back-country credentials.'
I walked to the kitchen window. My hazel-eyed reflection floated faintly over the concrete and traffic below. 'Callum, I haven't guided anyone in three years.'
'Come on, Mara. We worked together as countryside rangers for long enough. You know the Monadhliath and the western Cairngorms better than almost anyone. These people are paying premium rates because they want somebody competent, not a weekend ghillie with a glossy website.'
Even I could hear the scepticism in my voice. 'What sort of business types?'
'A property developer, a pharmaceutical executive and a private-equity director. Rich enough to demand the best, which is why I need you.'
I rubbed my temples. Babysitting wealthy amateurs across a remote sporting estate sounded like my personal version of hell, but GBP 4,500 would solve a great many immediate problems.
'Where?'
'Near Kingussie, then deep into a private estate in the Monadhliath. The stalking permission and firearms arrangements are all in order. We go in on 10 October and come out on the seventeenth. One week.'
'The weather has been unpredictable up there.'
'Exactly why I need somebody who can deal with whatever happens. Look, I know it isn't what you do now, but-'
'I'll do it.'
His pause told me he had expected more resistance. 'Seriously? Just like that?'
'Just like that.' I was already calculating how much of the overdraft I could clear. 'Send me the details.'
Two hours later, my inbox held the estate documents, liability waivers that had probably cost more to draft than I earned in a month, and equipment lists that read like an outdoor firm's luxury catalogue. I spent the rest of the evening emptying my storage cupboard and inspecting equipment I had not touched since leaving the ranger service.
My late grandmother's brass Silva-style compass still hung round my neck. I had never taken it off, even during the worst days after the divorce. I held it in my palm, watched the needle settle towards magnetic north, and tried to remember when I had last wanted to enter woodland rather than merely needed the money badly enough to overcome the fear that had followed me out of my old job.
The next morning, I spread Ordnance Survey Explorer maps across my kitchen table. The authorised stalking ground lay in a remote tract of the Monadhliath, well away from the busiest walking routes. I traced approaches, burns and escape routes with one finger. An abandoned forestry and estate maintenance bothy stood south-east of the principal stalking ground. Farther into the hills, the map showed disused lead-mine workings and a faint service path connecting them. I marked both. In an emergency, the safest extraction point would be the nearest single-track glen road accessible to mountain rescue, an air ambulance or a coastguard helicopter, but reaching it could take two days on foot.
I checked the estate permission, the season, weather forecasts, water sources and routes to the nearest staffed estate office and mountain-rescue access point. By the second day, my kit was organised and checked twice. My legally held rifle had been cleaned and zeroed, then unloaded and secured in its slip for transport. I restocked the first-aid kit and tested my emergency beacon, radio and rugged waterproof compact camera. I carried the camera in a chest pouch so that it would remain available even if our communications failed. I also rang a former ranger colleague to ask about recent wildlife activity and conditions in the hills.
On 10 October 2020, I drove four hours north from my flat in central Scotland to Kingussie, stopping only at a motorway service station, then followed a rough estate track deeper into the hills. Storm clouds massed above the western peaks, dark and heavy with the promise of early snow. I had seen Highland weather turn murderous in minutes, but something about those clouds tightened my stomach in a way I could not explain.
The lodge appeared beyond a bend among Scots pine, birch and rowan. It was a refurbished Victorian sporting lodge of granite and dark timber, with broad verandas and enough rooms for a small hotel. Trophy heads covered the walls visible through its tall windows: red deer, Balkan chamois, African antelope and a Cape buffalo mounted over the great-room fireplace. The place proclaimed a kind of wealth for which killing had become another collectible experience.
Three expensive four-wheel drives stood outside. Through the windows I saw people moving around with drinks in their hands. I parked my battered pickup between a pristine Range Rover and a German vehicle worth more than I had earned in the previous two years.
Callum met me at the door, grinning as if he had won the lottery. 'Mara, perfect timing. Come and meet everyone.'
He led me into a great room that could have served as a museum of dead animals. A fire crackled in a granite hearth large enough to stand in.
Three people waited beside a dark wooden bar.
'Everyone, this is Mara Whitlock, the guide I told you about,' Callum said. His pride was unmistakable. 'Mara, meet Rupert Hales.'
Rupert was tall and broad, with silver hair and an aggressive handshake that had probably accompanied many closed deals. His immaculate stalking jacket looked as though it had never met rain or mud.
'Rupert. Pleased to meet you.'
'Callum says you're the best guide money can buy in Scotland.' His voice had the confidence of a man accustomed to being the most important person in every room.
'I know the hills,' I said, freeing my hand.
'Excellent. I've hunted all over the world. Northern Scandinavia, Africa, the Balkans. But there is something special about taking a stag at home, isn't there?'
A woman approached with a satellite phone in one hand and a glass of expensive single-malt Scotch whisky in the other.
'Sonia Mercer.' Her handshake was firm and brief, as if she were already calculating the opportunity cost of our conversation. 'I hope you understand that I shall need to maintain some contact with the outside world. Pharmaceutical business does not stop for stalking holidays.'
'Provided it does not interfere with safety or the stalk,' I said.
The third client had remained near the bar, studying me with intelligent green eyes. When he finally approached, his manner was almost apologetic.
'Elliot Vane. Thank you for agreeing to guide us.' His handshake was gentler. 'This is my first serious stalking expedition. I'm hoping to learn as much as I can.'
At least one of them did not appear to regard the week as a corporate retreat with rifles.
Rupert soon launched into stories about previous hunts, complete with dramatic gestures and implausible claims about an enormous brown bear he had killed in northern Scandinavia. Sonia repeatedly glanced at her mobile and made notes about share prices and pharmaceutical patents. Elliot listened politely over a single drink.
I wondered what I had agreed to. They treated wild country as another luxury commodity to consume, package and boast about afterwards. The hills deserved more respect.
But GBP 4,500 was GBP 4,500, and my bills would not pay themselves. Callum saw my expression and gave me a reassuring nod. We had worked together long enough for him to read my moods without words.
It would be fine. One week of keeping rich people alive in the hills, then back to my flat and unpaid invoices.
Outside, the clouds continued gathering. I made a note to check the forecast again before we left. It was going to be a long week.
My watch alarm sounded at 04:30 the following morning, although I was already awake. Three hours of restless sleep had been filled with dreams of compass needles spinning wildly and clouds shaped like teeth.
I pulled on my boots, expecting a quiet lodge and clients preparing for an early start. Instead, laughter came from the great room. Through the windows, I saw Rupert gesticulating with a whisky tumbler while Sonia and Elliot sat at a card table. Empty bottles cluttered the bar.
I knocked and went in. 'Morning. We should be ready to leave in half an hour if we want to reach the ground before the deer settle.'
Rupert looked up with bloodshot eyes. 'Relax, Mara. We're paying you to guide us, not drill us. Besides, I've stalked often enough to know this early-bird business is overrated when one has the finest guide money can buy.'
Sonia did not look up from her mobile. 'The London market opens in a few hours. I need to monitor some pharmaceutical shares before we disappear into the wilderness.'
Elliot had the grace to look embarrassed. 'Sorry. I suggested we sleep, but Rupert bought another round.'
'And another after that,' Sonia said.
I went to the window. The sky above us was clear for the moment, but yesterday's storm mass still brooded over the west.
'The weather will turn. If we don't move soon, we'll be walking in rain.'
'A little water never hurt anyone,' Rupert said as he dealt another hand. 'That is what these expensive jackets are for, surely?'
For the next three hours, I nursed coffee while they played cards and squandered the best part of the morning. Every fifteen minutes I urged them to prepare. Every fifteen minutes Rupert waved me away with another remark about having paid for a relaxed experience.
At 07:30, I had had enough. 'We leave now. Load your kit or stay at the lodge, but I am not losing the whole morning because you cannot handle your whisky.'
Rupert's face darkened, but Callum intervened.
'She's right. Move.'
They stumbled about gathering equipment. Their rifles had remained unloaded and secured in slips as agreed, and Callum and I checked each one before it was carried outside. I loaded my rucksack with growing irritation.
We finally left at 08:00, three and a half hours after the planned 04:30 start. I led them along an estate path through Scots pine, birch and rowan, climbing steadily towards the authorised stalking ground. Rupert kept up a stream of commentary about his expeditions, each account more elaborate than the last.
'Northern Norway was extraordinary. Took a brown bear so enormous the guide said he'd never seen the like.'
Elliot struggled with a GBP 12,000 bespoke stalking rifle, still unloaded and carried awkwardly in its slip. At every stop he adjusted the sling or fidgeted with the case, plainly uncomfortable with its weight and balance.
'Here, let me show you,' I said during a water break. I checked that it was unloaded before helping him. 'You're carrying it like a briefcase. Let the sling take the weight and keep the muzzle controlled when it comes out of the slip.'
He tried the correction but remained awkward. Rich enough to buy the best, not experienced enough to use it.
Sonia kept her satellite terminal to hand, checking a deteriorating data connection and typing notes as she walked.
'The pharmaceutical sector is volatile today. I may need to make some calls at lunch.'
'No calls during a stalk,' I said. 'Sound carries. You will disturb every deer on the hill.'
She gave me the look of someone unused to instruction.
We reached a burn around midday and stopped to eat. The clients collapsed on fallen trunks while I checked the area for sign. Red-deer slots marked the mud by the water, perhaps two days old. Fresher roe-deer droppings lay beneath the trees. If we could remain quiet, the ground looked promising.
I was examining a scrape on a Scots pine when movement caught my eye upslope. Roughly two hundred metres away, a tall, thin figure stood among the trees near the skyline. Torn, weathered clothing hung from it. It was completely still, like a scarecrow abandoned on the hill.
'What have you got?' Callum came beside me and followed my gaze.
I raised my binoculars. Something was wrong with the figure's posture. It stood too straight and too still. No competent stalker would expose themselves so plainly against the skyline.
'Probably someone else on the hill,' I said, lowering the binoculars to indicate the place. 'There, beside those-'
When I looked again, the forest was empty.
'See anything?' Callum asked.
I searched every tree and patch of shadow. 'It must have moved.'
But nobody could have reached cover in the ten seconds I had watched it.
'Everything all right?' Rupert called.
'Fine. Checking the ground.'
I put away the binoculars and tried to dismiss the chill crawling up my spine. First-day nerves. Too much coffee and too little sleep.
We remained by the burn for another hour while the clients recovered from their hangovers. I used the time to study the Explorer map, confirm the afternoon route and choose a campsite. Then I remembered a detail in the estate documents that tightened my stomach.
No other stalking party had permission to use this part of the estate that week. We were supposed to be alone.
The afternoon passed without incident. We camped in a clearing midway to the main stalking ground, sheltered by pine but with good visibility. Every rifle was unloaded before anyone entered camp and returned to its slip. The clients erected their expensive tents while I collected fallen wood and checked the perimeter.
After dinner, Rupert and Elliot produced a pack of cards. Sonia worked at her laptop, coaxing a feeble internet connection through her satellite equipment. Registration dropped repeatedly, and each attempted connection took longer than the last. Callum helped me secure the food and review the following day's route.
'You seem on edge,' he said quietly, out of the others' hearing.
'I want this to go smoothly.'
I did not mention the watcher on the ridge. There was no point alarming him over something I might have imagined.
As darkness settled, however, I kept looking towards the trees. Every shadow seemed capable of concealing a body. Every cracking branch resembled a footstep.
After the others retired, I took my torch and walked a circuit of the woodland. I found ordinary sign in the soft ground: red deer, roe deer and several small predators. Nothing human.
Sleep still came reluctantly. In my sleeping bag, I listened to the night and told myself the next day would be easier. It was only first-day unease, too much responsibility and too many people who did not understand the country they had entered.
Yet I kept seeing that motionless figure among the pines.
It had not looked lost.
It had looked as though it were waiting.
The tracks stopped me cold the following day. I had been leading the party along a ridge path, keeping one eye on the weather and the other on Rupert as he described a planning dispute at one of his Surrey development sites, when unusual impressions in soft earth caught my attention.
They resembled bare human footprints, but were wrong in every respect that mattered.
I raised a hand for silence and crouched. Five toes, a heel and an arch were clearly defined, yet the whole print looked stretched, as though pulled lengthways. More than two metres separated each step. No human being could maintain such a stride, even at a sprint.
'What's the delay?' Rupert called. 'Are we paying you to inspect mud?'
I traced the edge without touching it. The depth indicated tremendous weight. The toes were elongated, but the impression was too clean for an oversized boot.
'Mara?' Sonia's voice cut through the morning from farther along the path. It held something close to panic.
I stood and ran towards her, leaving the tracks behind. The others had stopped about fifty metres ahead, where the path curved round a great pine. Elliot was bent double, retching. Rupert had his rifle out of its slip but held it uncertainly, muzzle raised away from the group. Sonia pointed into the canopy.
A flayed red stag hung about five metres above the ground, old steel cable looped round its hind legs and secured to thick branches. Its hide had been removed with surgical precision and hung in separate sheets around the carcass like curtains. Beneath it, the organs had been arranged at measured intervals: heart, liver, lungs and kidneys laid out in a deliberate pattern.
The stench struck me like a blow. Decay mingled with the metallic reek of blood and made my eyes water.
'Christ,' Callum whispered.
Elliot wiped his mouth with a shaking hand. 'Who would do that?'
Rupert lowered his rifle. His face was red with outrage. 'Animal-rights extremists. It has to be. I've dealt with this sort of harassment at development sites in Surrey. They are trying to frighten us off.'
I examined the scene without approaching the body. The cables were old and rusted. Complex knots secured them, the work of someone with serious practical knowledge. The stag's eyes had been removed and forced into its mouth, leaving its ruined face fixed in grotesque surprise.
'This wasn't done by protesters,' I said.
'Then what?' Sonia demanded. She kept her distance but could not stop staring at the organs. 'Some sort of ritual?'
Callum moved closer to me. 'My grandfather used to tell me stories about things like this. Estate stories, mostly. Old warnings about the hills and the famine years. He said there were creatures-'
'Spare us the folklore,' Rupert interrupted. 'This is vandalism. Probably the same sort of bastards who obstruct my planning applications.'
I took the waterproof camera from my chest pouch and photographed the cables, knots, arrangement of organs and mutilated face. Evidence, though I did not yet know of what.
'We need to report this.'
I checked my satellite phone. The battery was charged, and the sky was open, but it could not register with the network. Every connection attempt failed.
'Try yours,' I told Sonia.
She switched on her device and frowned. 'The battery is dead. I charged it this morning.'
'Let me see.'
It was completely drained, although its charging indicator had been green when we left camp two hours before. Elliot checked his own handset.
'Mine too. That isn't possible.'
A chill unrelated to the cold moved up my back. I had known equipment to fail, but not three separate devices at once after Sonia's connection had deteriorated so strangely the previous night.
'We continue to the next campsite,' I decided. 'We'll try again from there.'
'Shouldn't we cut it down?' Elliot asked.
'Don't touch it.'
The words came out more sharply than I intended. The scene felt like a warning, and I had no desire to discover what happened to those who ignored it.
We gave the stag a wide berth and continued. I maintained a steady pace, but my attention kept returning to the woodland. Every shadow might have hidden a watcher. Every snapping twig sounded deliberate.
Then I noticed more tracks. They followed our route just inside the tree line, where pine needles made them difficult to trace. Every few hundred metres, however, they crossed mud or exposed ground. The same impossible prints kept pace with us like a silent escort.
I said nothing. Rupert was already furious about imagined extremists, and Elliot seemed close to panic.
Once the threat was no longer merely hypothetical, Callum and I changed our firearms procedure. Away from the others, we loaded our rifles and kept them under direct control, muzzles safe and fingers clear of the triggers. The clients' rifles remained unloaded unless we specifically instructed otherwise.
Callum fell into step beside me at the next break.
'You've seen the tracks too?' he asked.
'Yes.'
'Whatever made them has followed us since the stag. It is staying hidden, but not making much effort.'
I looked into the trees and saw nothing. 'How many?'
'Hard to tell. More than one, I think.' He lowered his voice. 'Those stories my grandfather told weren't entertainment. I know how this sounds, Mara, but the stag, the tracks and the equipment failure are exactly the sort of things he warned me about.'
I wanted to tell him there must be rational explanations. Instead, the stretched prints filled my mind, accompanied by the certainty that something fundamental was wrong with the estate.
We reached the next camp as the afternoon shadows lengthened. It was a small clearing beside a burn, protected by pines and open on most sides. The clients put up their tents while I examined the perimeter.
Fresh prints marked the mud of the burn. Their edges had not yet softened. They were human in outline, but the toes were too long, the heels too narrow, and the depth suggested something far heavier than a person.
When I looked up, something moved among the trees on the opposite bank. I glimpsed pale skin and dark, ragged clothing before it vanished.
I rose slowly, one hand close to my rifle. The woodland had fallen silent. No birds called. No leaves stirred. There was only water running over stone.
'Everything all right?' Callum asked behind me.
I turned towards the camp, where the others arranged equipment and began preparing the fire. Ordinary voices. Ordinary movement.
'Fine. Just checking the area.'
Yet the forest's silence felt like a held breath. As we returned to camp, I could not escape the conviction that we were being watched by something that had watched human beings for a very long time.
The next evening, the fire threw restless shadows across the pines. Rupert opened a bottle of costly single malt after dinner, and the drink loosened everyone's tongues. Even Elliot, who had nursed one bottled pale ale for an hour, seemed calmer.
'You know,' Callum said, settling against his rucksack with a tumbler in hand, 'my grandfather told stories about these hills.'
'Here we go,' Rupert said, already on his third whisky. 'Ghost tales for the city people.'
'Not ghosts. Something older.' Callum stared into the flames. 'There are ancient Pictish carvings in some of these glens, and later Gaelic warnings survived in local oral tradition. Not a recognised legend, exactly. More an estate story tied to famine, isolation and cannibalism.'
Sonia looked up from the satellite phone she had been trying unsuccessfully to register. 'What was it called?'
'The Famine Walker.' Callum spoke quietly. 'The story says it isn't merely a creature. It is a hunger and a curse. When desperate people consume human flesh, they cross a boundary they cannot recross. Something changes. The hunger grows until nothing human remains.'
'Cannibalism,' Elliot whispered.
Callum nodded. 'And the curse can pass through an infected bite or wound. Those who change become Walkers themselves. That is why the old accounts never agree on whether there is one creature or several.'
Rupert snorted. 'Fairy tales.'
'My grandfather was not given to fairy tales.' An edge entered Callum's voice. 'He said they could imitate voices and repeat words they had heard. They could move without sound despite standing well over two metres tall. And they were strong enough to tear a man apart.'
The fire cracked and sent sparks twisting upwards. All five of us flinched. I found myself searching the darkness beyond the light.
'I saw something yesterday,' Elliot said suddenly. 'On the ridge when we stopped by the burn. Someone was watching us.'
'Another stalking party,' Rupert said dismissively.
'No.' Elliot shook his head. 'It stood too still for too long. It was as if it wasn't breathing.'
Sonia laid down her useless phone. 'I found something odd earlier. When I went behind those birches, there were fresh marks cut into the trunks.'
'What sort of marks?' I asked.
'Symbols, perhaps. Or scratches. They were deep, as though someone had used a knife, or...' She stopped and shivered despite the heat.
I stood and took my torch. 'Show me.'
She led me roughly fifty metres from camp to a group of birches. My beam found the marks at once. Deep gouges scored the white bark in patterns that made my eyes water when I tried to follow them. They were not random. The shapes seemed to shift under the torchlight, although I knew they could not.
No knife had made them. They were too broad and ragged, as though immense claws had been dragged down the trunks with tremendous force. The wood still bled sap.
'Christ,' I whispered, touching the wet edge of one cut.
When we returned, Callum was showing the others a saved image on his mobile. The phone itself had no connection, but the file was stored locally.
'I found this while researching the estate before we came,' he said. 'A report dated 14 October 1981.'
The grainy photograph showed six stalkers smiling at the camera. The headline read, 'Six missing on remote Highland estate.'
'They disappeared in this part of the Monadhliath,' Callum continued. 'Experienced stalkers, including professional guides. Searchers found pieces of five bodies scattered across miles of hill. Arms in one place, legs in another, as though something had played with them.'
'Jesus Christ,' Rupert muttered. His scepticism had faded.
'One man survived. Alastair Brodie. He emerged three days later, half dead and raving about something that walked like a man but moved like an animal. He said it called to them from the dark in voices they trusted.'
Elliot leaned towards the screen. 'What became of him?'
'Long-term psychiatric care. He was eventually discharged, but never withdrew his account. He died on 03 October 2022.'
Movement caught my eye beyond the fire. Pale skin flashed between two trunks, then disappeared.
I kept my face neutral, unwilling to frighten the others, but rested my hand near the rifle across my knees.
'Interesting story,' I said. 'We should sleep. Tomorrow will be hard.'
Rupert finished his whisky. 'Quite. We won't find any stags if we're jumping at shadows.'
As the others prepared for bed, I remained beside the fire, adding wood and watching the darkness. Every few minutes, movement touched the edge of my vision. Each shape vanished when I turned towards it.
I swept the tree line with my torch. Nothing appeared.
Then I walked the perimeter and found the tracks.
Fresh impressions marked the soft ground close to camp. They were deeper than those on the trail and far more recent. Several distinct sets formed an uneven circle around our tents.
Something had watched us while we sat by the fire.
Several somethings.
I returned to my place and quietly checked my rifle. The magazine was full, and I loaded the chamber only because an immediate, confirmed threat now surrounded the camp. I kept the safety applied and the muzzle directed away from the tents.
'Callum,' I said softly.
He looked out of his sleeping bag. 'Yes?'
'I'm taking first watch. Wake in three hours and relieve me.'
He heard what I was not saying. 'Understood.'
The others settled inside their tents. I fed the fire and tried to appear calm, but my eyes never stopped moving. Rupert's whisky bottle stood beside his tent. For a moment, I considered taking a drink to settle my nerves. Instead, I watched and waited.
The flames sank. The shadows lengthened.
Somewhere beyond the camp, something possessed the patience to wait until we believed ourselves safe.
I did not sleep.
The screaming began before dawn.
It was not a startled cry but the raw, animal sound of genuine terror. I came out of my sleeping bag with the rifle already in my hands, old emergency-response habits taking over before I was fully awake.
'Elliot!' Sonia shouted into the dark. 'Elliot, where are you?'
His tent was empty.
Worse than empty, it had been destroyed. Orange nylon hung in ribbons, its walls splashed with blood. His sleeping bag had been torn apart, synthetic filling scattered like snow.
Callum appeared beside me, pulling on his jacket. 'Christ.'
Rupert staggered from his tent, hair wild and eyes wide. 'What the hell happened?'
I knelt beside the wreckage and switched on my torch. Drag marks gouged the soil towards the trees. Elliot's boot prints mingled with the elongated impressions that had followed us.
'Stay here,' I told Rupert and Sonia. 'Guard the camp.'
'Like hell,' Rupert began.
'Somebody must protect the kit. We don't know whether it will return.'
Callum was already following the trail, his torch moving across the disturbed ground. The drag marks went directly into the woodland. Branches had broken at shoulder height where something large had forced a passage.
We moved carefully, following footprints and snapped twigs. The trail was too easy, as though Elliot's abductor wanted us to find him. The thought clenched my stomach, but I forced myself to concentrate.
Find Elliot. Treat him. Work out the rest afterwards.
The trail descended towards a ravine I remembered from the Explorer map. Its sides were steep and its floor strewn with rock, the sort of place where an injured walker could die if they could not climb out.
My torch passed over granite walls and boulders before finding him.
Elliot sat slumped against a pine at the bottom. He was conscious, but barely. His costly jacket had been ripped open and soaked with blood. A deep wound gaped along his left leg, exposing bone.
'Elliot,' Callum called quietly, unwilling to attract whatever had done this.
Elliot raised his head. His green eyes would not focus. 'Mara? Is that really you?'
'It's us.'
I scrambled down, checking every patch of darkness. 'What happened?'
'It... it came to my tent.' His voice was scarcely audible. 'Just before dawn. I heard Sonia outside, calling for help. She said she was hurt and needed me.'
I knelt to examine the wound. It was deep and ragged, as though contaminated claws or a blunt, filthy blade had driven foreign matter into it. Worse, the edges were already black. Dark veins advanced beneath the skin with impossible speed.
'I opened the tent to help her,' he continued, fever slurring his words. 'But it wasn't Sonia. It was... God, I don't know what it was.'
The creature had listened to Sonia since our first day. It had repeated words and tones it had already heard, exactly as Callum's story described.
Callum found Elliot's rifle nearly six metres away. Its stock was split and its barrel bent, as though someone had tried to fold it in half.
'Tell us about the attacker,' I said.
'Tall. Far too tall, but hunched as though it couldn't stand upright. Grey skin stretched over bone. And its eyes...' He shuddered. 'Black. No whites or pupils. Just black.'
His pulse raced weakly beneath my fingers. His skin burned. No natural infection could produce fever and spreading necrosis within minutes. Whatever was happening to him was supernatural, or so far outside medicine that the distinction no longer mattered.
'How did you escape?'
'My camping hatchet was beside the sleeping bag. It came at me with a rusty stalking knife, an old one, perhaps from the eighties. I struck its arm. It screamed, but the sound was wrong. Then it grabbed me and threw me down here.'
Callum and I exchanged a look. Elliot weighed a little over seventy kilos. Hurling him into the ravine would still have required extraordinary strength.
'The way it moved...' Elliot whispered. 'Not like a person. It ran on all fours, but it was wearing clothes. Old stalking clothes, torn and stained.'
I opened the first-aid kit and irrigated the wound, but the corruption spread while I worked. Black veins had already reached his knee. The surrounding flesh was hot enough to hurt my gloved hands.
'We need an NHS hospital,' I said.
'How?' Callum gestured at the ravine walls. 'It will take both of us to lift him out. From here, the safest route to the glen road is two days with a casualty, perhaps longer in this weather. A helicopter cannot land or winch safely among these trees and crags. We have to reach open ground first.'
I was calculating distance and travel time when Elliot seized my arm.
'My satellite phone. It was in the tent. Did you find it?'
Callum shook his head. 'Nothing electronic was left in there.'
Real panic struck me then.
I climbed back to camp while Callum remained with Elliot. Our communications equipment had not been smashed. It had been stolen. The remaining satellite phones, emergency beacon and backup radio were all gone. Sonia's separately inventoried flare pistol and signal cartridges remained in her personal emergency pouch, but they could summon help only if someone was close enough to see them.
Whatever had entered camp had removed every device capable of contacting Police Scotland on 999, the Scottish Ambulance Service, mountain rescue or coastguard rescue support.
When I returned to the ravine, Rupert was arguing with Callum about evacuation.
'Two days is too long,' Rupert said. 'Look at him. He needs antibiotics now, not in forty-eight hours.'
'You want to carry him for twenty miles?' Callum replied. 'Because I promise you cannot.'
Sonia stood on the edge of the ravine, staring at Elliot with an expression I could not read.
'The communications kit is gone,' I said as I began rigging ropes to bring Elliot up. 'Taken while we were searching.'
'Taken?' Rupert's voice cracked. 'You mean that thing understood enough to isolate us?'
I did not answer because I had reached the same conclusion. This was not blind animal hunger. It planned. It listened. It knew which tools connected us to the world beyond the estate.
Using rope, pine poles and paracord, we made a stretcher and hauled Elliot out of the ravine. He remained conscious, but his condition worsened by the minute. The blackness had spread above his knee, and his fever continued to climb.
I had seen injuries in the hills that looked better. Back at camp, I laid out our options while Sonia tried to make Elliot comfortable.
"The nearest staffed estate office and mountain-rescue access point is two days south. An air ambulance or coastguard helicopter cannot land or winch safely in this terrain and weather. We would have to reach the open ground beside the nearest single-track glen road first."
"Then we go," Rupert said.
"Pack light and move fast."
"With an injured man burning up with fever?"
I shook my head.
"He will not last six hours, never mind two days."
"So what do you suggest?" Sonia demanded. "Stay here and hope somebody finds us?"
I was about to answer when we heard it.
"Help me. Please, somebody help me."
Elliot's voice was calling from the woodland beyond our camp, although Elliot lay unconscious beside the fire, finally overcome by the fever.
The voice came again, closer this time.
"I'm hurt. I can't make it back to camp."
The mimicry was perfect. Every inflection and vocal quirk that made Elliot's speech distinctive was there, yet something was wrong, as if a recording were being played at the wrong speed.
Rupert started towards the sound, his legally held stalking rifle now loaded and ready in his hands.
"That's impossible. He's right here."
I caught his arm. "Don't."
"But if there is another survivor -"
"There isn't."
The voice called again, and this time I heard the wrongness clearly. There was too much breath behind the words, as though something with larger lungs were forcing speech through a human throat.
Callum crossed himself and moved nearer the fire. "It's learning our voices."
The calls continued for another ten minutes, becoming more desperate and then angrier when we refused to answer. At last silence returned to the Scots pine, birch and rowan around us.
None of us relaxed. I checked Elliot's pulse again. He was still alive, but the infection was winning. Black veins had reached his hip, and his skin felt hot enough to burn my fingers.
"We have a choice," I said quietly. "We risk moving him and probably lose him on the trail, or we stay here, try to signal for help and defend ourselves against whatever is out there."
Rupert tightened his grip on the rifle. "Some choice."
I looked from Elliot's fevered face to the dark woodland surrounding us and realised that the decision might already have been made. Whatever hunted us knew precisely where we were, and it was becoming cleverer.
The abandoned forestry and estate maintenance bothy stood in a little clearing like a forgotten memory, its weathered timbers and rusted corrugated roof barely visible through the pine branches. I had noticed it before the expedition while studying the Ordnance Survey Explorer maps, along with the disused lead-mine workings farther uphill, and I remembered the place from my years with the Highland Council countryside ranger service. It had been abandoned when budgets were cut and maintenance operations consolidated. Few walkers ever found it, but it was solid enough to offer genuine shelter.
"Thank God," Rupert breathed as we approached. "Actual walls."
A simple padlock secured the door, but rust had eaten through it. I kicked it free and pushed inside, sweeping my torch across the room. The bothy was roughly four metres by five, with a stone fireplace and two small windows. Dust covered everything, but the roof appeared intact and the walls were made from heavy, well-fitted timbers.
Callum helped me carry Elliot inside while Rupert and Sonia brought in our equipment. Elliot had regained consciousness, but only just. His fever had risen again, and the infection had spread beyond his knee. Black veins crept up his thigh like poisonous ivy.
"Put him beside the fireplace," I said, clearing rubbish from the floor. "We need to bring his temperature down."
Sonia knelt beside him and checked his pulse. "One hundred and forty. Dangerously high."
I found old newspapers and dry kindling in a cupboard. Within minutes we had a fire burning and warmth spreading through the bothy.
Full darkness had settled outside, turning the windows into black mirrors filled with our worried faces. My own hazel eyes looked almost colourless in the reflection. Rupert sat by the door with his rifle across his knees.
"How secure is this place?"
"Better than the tents."
I checked both windows. Each had stout wooden shutters that latched from within.
"But it isn't a fortress."
Callum ran his hands along the joints between the timbers. "Solid construction. Nothing will come through these without making a serious effort."
We arranged our sleeping bags around the hearth and inventoried what remained. We had perhaps two days' food if we rationed it carefully. Water was available from the burn nearby, but our medical supplies were dwindling. Elliot needed treatment we could not provide, and Sonia's small first-aid kit was useless against whatever had contaminated his wound.
"His temperature is still rising," Sonia said, pressing a damp cloth to his forehead. "And look."
The black veins had reached his hip. Worse, the skin around the original wound was turning grey, as though the tissue were dying from within.
"What sort of infection moves that quickly?" Rupert demanded.
I had no answer. In eight years as a countryside ranger I had seen infected wounds, sepsis and hypothermia, but nothing resembling this. The advance was too fast and too deliberate, as if something were moving purposefully through Elliot's bloodstream. No natural infection behaved that way. Whatever had entered the wound with the contaminated matter from the butchered stag was supernatural.
At about 21:00, we heard the first footsteps.
They were soft at first, scarcely audible above the fire. Someone or something was crossing the clearing. I raised a hand for silence and listened.
Measured steps circled the bothy. This was not a lost walker blundering about but a deliberate reconnaissance. Whatever was outside was examining our shelter for weaknesses.
Rupert lifted his rifle. "Should I?"
"No," I whispered. "Do not let it know we have heard it."
The steps passed along the rear wall, beneath each window and then across the front. They stopped directly outside the door.
We sat motionless, barely breathing. Elliot's fevered muttering was the only sound inside.
Then came the scratching: something hard dragged in long, deliberate strokes across the outer wall. It sounded like metal on timber, like a knife testing the wood. The noise set my teeth on edge.
Callum crossed himself. Sonia pressed closer to Elliot, one hand resting on her unloaded rifle. Rupert's knuckles whitened around his weapon.
The scratching progressed methodically along the wall. Whatever waited outside was mapping every part of the shelter and learning how it had been built. At the first window, a shutter creaked as something tested it. The scratching resumed and moved to the second. That shutter was tested too.
Then there was silence.
My watch showed 23:30. We waited, listening to our heartbeats and Elliot's ragged breathing. The fire cracked and sent sparks up the chimney. Every one of us jumped.
Midnight passed. Outside, the woodland had become utterly still. There were no night birds, no leaves stirring, nothing but an unnatural hush that crawled over my skin.
Then Rupert's voice spoke from outside.
"Hello? It's me. I stepped out for a piss and the door is stuck. Can somebody let me in?"
The real Rupert, sitting beside me, began to rise in confusion. I seized his arm and clamped my hand over his mouth.
"What the hell?" he whispered against my palm.
The thing outside continued in Rupert's precise tone and cadence.
"Come on, this isn't funny. It's freezing out here."
I pointed at Rupert and then the door, shaking my head. Understanding entered his eyes.
"Hello?" the voice called, more insistently. "Mara? Callum? I know you can hear me."
Sonia stared at the door as if it might burst inward. Callum gripped his rifle so tightly that his hands shook.
"Look, I'm sorry about earlier, all right? I know I've been an arse about this trip, but I'm frightened. Please open the door."
It reproduced every mannerism perfectly, but beneath the voice lay that same unplaceable wrongness.
"This is bloody ridiculous!" it shouted. "I'm paying you people good money and you're leaving me out here to freeze?"
Rupert tried to answer, but I kept my hand over his mouth. Whatever stood outside was not him.
The voice changed to Elliot's weak whisper.
"Mara, I think I'm dying. Please help me."
Elliot lay unconscious by the hearth.
Then it used Callum's voice, repeating words it had heard beside our earlier fire.
"These hills were wrong long before we arrived. We should never have come here."
Sonia's voice followed.
"The infection is spreading. We need to get him to hospital."
Then mine.
"Everyone stay calm. We are going to get through this."
All the voices began speaking together, fragments overheard since our first day on the estate. The twisted chorus grew louder, more demanding and less human until the noise seemed to press against the inside of my skull.
Something massive struck the door. The braced timber cracked but held. A second impact made one hinge groan.
"Away from the door."
I raised my rifle and fired three rounds through the planks. A shriek answered, neither human nor animal but something between the two. Every hair on my body rose. Heavy footsteps retreated into the trees.
"Jesus Christ," Rupert breathed. "What was that?"
Before I could reply, something scraped across the corrugated roof. A large body moved above us, probing for weakness. A sheet beside the chimney bowed under its weight.
"It's trying to get inside," Sonia whispered.
I tracked the sound with my rifle. The creature was heavy enough to buckle the roof yet moved with astonishing stealth. It stopped over the fireplace. I pictured it crouching there, considering the chimney and judging whether its body would fit.
"Mara." Panic sharpened Sonia's voice. "Look at Elliot."
I turned and felt the blood drain from me. Elliot had stopped breathing. His chest was still and his skin had acquired the grey pallor of death.
I knelt to check for a pulse.
His eyes opened.
They were entirely black: no whites, no irises, no pupils, only darkness drinking the firelight. He lunged at Sonia with inhuman speed.
I had seen people die, but never a corpse move. Elliot's body contorted, joints bending at impossible angles as he hurled himself at her. His teeth had lengthened into predatory points. Before any of us could react, he bit deep into Sonia's shoulder.
Her scream cut through the bothy.
Callum seized Elliot from behind and tried to drag him away, but the transformed thing possessed impossible strength. It flung Callum across the room as though he weighed nothing.
I had a clear shot. The creature wearing Elliot's face turned towards me, black eyes reflecting the flames and Sonia's blood running from its mouth. It smiled.
I fired into the centre of its chest. The impact spun it round, but it straightened and rushed me. I fired repeatedly. Each bullet tore through its torso without stopping it. Only a shot through the head brought it down. It twitched once and became still.
The room fell silent except for Sonia's sobbing. She clutched her shoulder as blood welled between her fingers. The margins of the bite were already black.
"No," she whispered. "No, no, no."
Callum helped her upright, but all of us understood. The same black veins that had killed and transformed Elliot were creeping across her shoulder, faster even than before. His bite had passed the curse into her wound.
Something heavy dropped from the roof beside the door. The principal creature was back, and it sounded enraged. I reloaded and tried not to think about what we would have to do when Sonia stopped breathing.
The roof tore inward with a thunderous crash. Corrugated sheets peeled back as a massive shape dropped among us with impossible grace. Dust and fragments rained around a nightmare crouched in the lamplight, well over two metres tall.
My mind struggled to understand it. A skeletal frame had been stretched beyond human proportions. Grey skin clung to bones projecting at unnatural angles. Its arms hung below its knees, ending in fingers like corroded blades.
Its face was worse. It might once have been human, except for the black sockets and the mouth packed with sharpened teeth. It wore a torn stalking jacket of a style fashionable around 1981, stained by decades of blood, and boots that might have belonged to one of the six missing stalkers Callum had told us about. It collected pieces of its victims.
Rupert raised his rifle, but the creature moved faster than anything of that size should have moved. One instant it crouched beside the hearth; the next it had him against the wall. Its claws passed through his expensive jacket and into his body.
"Jesus Christ!"
Rupert screamed as its teeth closed on his throat.
I fired. A bullet punched through its back and sprayed dark blood across the timber. It did not slow. My second round tore through its shoulder. Still it lifted Rupert clear of the floor and bit harder.
Blood struck the wall. Rupert's screams became wet gurgles, and his costly watch flashed in the lamplight as his arm fell limp.
"Get off him!"
Callum hurled a paraffin lantern at the creature's head. The glass broke and burning fuel spread over its jacket and shoulders. Flames took hold, engulfing it. It released Rupert and turned towards us, still moving.
The stench of burning flesh mingled with ancient rot. My eyes watered, but it kept coming, shedding smoke and embers as its claws reached for Callum.
I emptied the magazine into its chest. Five rounds struck the centre of its body. It did not even stagger.
Sonia struggled upright, her movements clumsy as the curse spread. Her rifle trembled in her hands.
"What does it take to kill this thing?"
Its head snapped towards her voice. Recognition seemed to stir within the black sockets. It knew she had been bitten and understood that she was changing. The sound in its throat was neither growl nor laughter.
Callum tackled me aside as it lunged. Claws ripped deep grooves into the wall where my head had been.
"The gas!" Sonia cried, pointing towards the cooking equipment with a shaking hand. "The cylinders!"
She raised the separately inventoried flare pistol, our pyrotechnic distress signal, and fired. The red flare struck the supply pile.
Fire raced through the equipment. The camping-gas cylinders heated, ruptured and intensified the blaze, throwing fragments of the stove, kit and roof across the room.
"Move!"
I grabbed Callum and dived for the entrance. We crashed through as the roof began collapsing behind us. Burning timbers fell where we had stood, and flames reached towards the pine canopy.
I turned for Sonia. She was already staggering through the doorway, black veins spreading up her neck. She could scarcely hold her rifle.
Then the creature emerged from the fire, still burning and still moving. Charred scraps of jacket fell from it. The blast and debris had torn pieces from its body, yet it advanced with the same spider-like grace.
The fire had only angered it.
"Run."
We plunged into the woodland along an animal track I remembered from my ranger days. Behind us, the creature hammered through the undergrowth, each long stride covering more than two metres.
Sonia fell after perhaps fifty metres. I pulled her up, but she could barely stand. The infection had reached her face, and darkness was gathering at the edges of her eyes.
"Leave me," she gasped.
"Not happening."
Callum took her other arm. We forced our way downhill through dense pine, branches lashing our faces. Behind us, trees cracked as the creature smashed through obstacles that would have halted any person.
Sonia stumbled again and brought all three of us down. When I helped her rise, her skin felt icy despite the fever.
"I can feel it," she whispered. "The infection. It is changing the way I think."
I searched the track behind us. Nothing moved, but that meant little. The creature could be patient.
"We have to keep going."
"No."
Sonia pulled away and raised her rifle with shaking hands.
"I can feel what it wants. What I am beginning to want."
Callum stepped towards her. "Sonia, you are still yourself. We can work this out."
"Look at my eyes."
The whites were darkening like ink diffusing through water.
"I am thinking about how you would taste. Both of you."
The barrel moved towards us and then back beneath her own chin. Her finger settled on the trigger.
"Tell them what happened here," she said. "Tell them to stay away."
The gunshot echoed through the trees. Sonia collapsed onto the track, finally still.
I stood there for perhaps three seconds, trying to comprehend it.
Then the principal creature resumed its pursuit, closer than before.
"This way."
I led Callum off the track and into a stony burn that would obscure our trail. "The old lead-mine workings connect with natural caves about two miles from here. I studied the estate records and mapped part of them when I was a ranger."
We moved through the water, stepping on stones where possible and avoiding the muddy banks. Behind us, something crashed through the woodland without bothering to hide. It had our scent.
The entrance was where I remembered: a narrow gap between granite slabs, concealed by pine boughs. The passage led into water-cut caves adjoining the abandoned mine.
"Can it fit?" Callum asked.
"We are about to find out."
We squeezed through into darkness that swallowed our torch beams. The passage extended deep into the hill and divided farther in.
Something struck the entrance behind us. Claws scraped stone, and rock dust fell as the creature tried to force its body through.
"Move."
We crawled deeper. Its frustrated shrieks diminished behind us, but I knew it would not surrender. It would find another entrance or wait for us to emerge.
Either way, we were trapped.
Ancient Pictish carvings covered the walls of a wider chamber. Later Gaelic words had been cut among them, matching fragments of an estate legend preserved in local oral tradition. Neither Callum nor I pretended that the Famine Walker was authentic folklore; it was a name generations of frightened people had attached to famine, cannibalism and disappearances they could not explain.
My torch shook over crude but unmistakable figures: tall, skeletal beings with black eyes hunting smaller human shapes. One panel showed a person consuming human flesh and then changing, lengthening into something else.
"God," Callum whispered, tracing the air above the stone without touching it. "My grandfather knew the local warnings. He said these marks showed places where the hunger had walked."
Moisture and centuries had weathered the carvings, but their warning remained clear. This was no recent evil. It had lived beneath these hills for generations, feeding and multiplying. The curse passed through human flesh, whether eaten willingly or driven into a wound by an infected bite. There was never only one Famine Walker. The tracks circling our tents had belonged to more than one, although one ancient creature had led the hunt.
Scraping grew louder behind us. Bones cracked as the principal creature forced itself through passages too narrow for its frame. Its shrieks ricocheted around the chamber.
"There."
I pointed towards an opening on the far side. "That reaches the lead-mine workings. Estate records showed an old emergency store and a side adit beyond it."
An underground stream crossed our route. We splashed through black water. The cold shocked me into focus.
The mine tunnel had been cut through granite by men dead long before either of us was born. Our steps echoed differently there, the sharp sound of human engineering replacing the soft curves of the caves.
The creature burst through a weakened partition of fractured rock beside us. Granite fragments flew across the tunnel as the towering nightmare blocked our way.
The fire had changed it. Burns covered most of its body, but the damaged flesh had hardened into an armour-like crust. Its movements had become smoother and less human, as though it had settled comfortably into its true form.
It attacked Callum. Its claws raked his chest, tearing his jacket and the flesh beneath. He screamed and staggered, blood spreading across his shirt, but remained upright and raised his rifle.
My torch swept the tunnel. A sealed mine store stood behind a corroded metal door bearing faded explosive warnings. The lock had failed with age. Inside were old wooden cases marked as gelignite, left when the workings were abandoned. I knew from former ranger training and the labels that old gelignite might still detonate and could become dangerously unstable. I had no certainty that it would work as intended, only the certainty that we had no other weapon.
Callum fired three rounds into the creature's chest while I dragged a case into the tunnel and found the old initiation materials stored with it. The bullets did not stop the creature, but they drew its attention.
I set the charge with shaking hands and lit the fuse. It caught and burned much faster than I expected.
The creature understood. It abandoned Callum and came for me, scuttling along the tunnel roof as though gravity meant nothing. Its claws bit into granite.
Callum threw himself between us and caught it around the waist. His weight brought it down. Claws tore through his back, but he held on, bleeding heavily as he fought something many times stronger.
"Get out!" he shouted.
I had seconds. The blast might collapse the workings or fail altogether. Callum was already dying, but he had remembered the side adit shown in the estate records. Its outlet lay beyond the unstable wall behind him.
I ran.
The explosion struck as I reached the carved chamber. The hill convulsed. Mine supports failed in sequence, and rock dust filled the air as old workings collapsed behind me.
I followed a natural chimney that I remembered from the survey, clawing upwards through loose stone and pine roots until I burst into the pale morning.
My hands bled and my ears rang, but I was alive.
I found Callum near the concealed outlet of the side adit, roughly fifty metres from the cave entrance. The blast had blown him clear through the failing opening and thrown him against a pine. He sat propped against its trunk, but the wounds across his chest and back were too deep. Blood soaked his shirt and pooled among the needles.
"Mara," he whispered. "You made it."
I knelt and assessed him, although we both knew there was nothing I could do. The claws had opened arteries and damaged organs. He was bleeding to death miles from help.
"The thing?"
"Buried. The workings came down on it."
I did not say dead. Neither of us could know that.
He nodded. "Good. My grandfather would have been proud."
He coughed, flecking his lips with blood. "Listen. When you get back, tell people what happened. The authorities may not believe you. Warn the stalkers, walkers and climbers."
"Callum -"
His grip tightened on my arm. "Promise me you will make people understand that they must stay away from this part of the hills."
"I promise."
He smiled, and for a moment he looked like the Callum I had known before the expedition, the old countryside-ranger friend who told stories beside fires and worried about providing for his family while trying to establish his guiding business.
"Tell my wife I love her. Tell her I died protecting people."
Then he was gone.
I sat with him for nearly an hour, holding his hand as it cooled. The woodland was silent. No birds, no insects, nothing, as though the entire ecosystem knew an unnatural hunger had been buried beneath the mountain.
It took me two days to reach help. Injured and guided by my late grandmother's brass Silva-style compass, I followed the safest route I knew towards the glen road. I met nobody because the private estate was remote and temporarily closed to other visitors during authorised stalking. By the time I reached the pickup point, I had prepared the only account I thought the authorities might initially accept.
I called 999. Police Scotland, the Scottish Ambulance Service, volunteer mountain rescue and coastguard helicopter support became involved. I received NHS hospital care while search teams entered the estate when the weather allowed.
They found the ruined bothy and identified Rupert's burned remains through dental records. Elliot's shot body had also been destroyed in the fire. Sonia and Callum remained missing. I gave rescuers Callum's last location, but rockfall, unstable workings and inaccessible terrain prevented recovery.
The public summary attributed Rupert and Elliot's deaths to a camping-gas cylinder explosion in the bothy. Sonia and Callum were presumed to have died from falls, exposure and subsequent animal scavenging. The fuller Police Scotland, countryside ranger service and mountain-rescue investigation remained restricted rather than sealed.
I spent three months trying to make people hear the truth. I spoke to Police Scotland, the ranger service and reporters interested in unusual stories. Nobody wanted to discuss creatures that mimicked voices or a supernatural transformation spreading through contaminated wounds and bites.
Eventually I stopped trying to persuade people who had already decided disbelief was safer. Six months later I moved to Manchester, sold what I owned in the Highlands and bought a small flat where I could see concrete, traffic and tower blocks instead of trees. I found work as a security consultant for outdoor-equipment firms. The irony was not lost on me, but it paid my overdraft and the solicitor's fees left by the divorce while keeping me away from actual wilderness.
I never returned to the back country.
Sometimes I dreamed of the carvings and the warnings left by people who had faced the same hunger. I wondered whether any of them had survived long enough to understand that it could not be killed, only contained.
The cave and mine area was marked as dangerously unstable. A later countryside ranger sought a temporary safety restriction based on fatal accidents, hazardous terrain and collapsing workings, not folklore. It was not enough. Something so patient and intelligent would not remain buried for ever.
I had promised Callum I would warn people. I posted anonymously on walking and stalking forums, identifying the dangerous area only in broad terms. I supplied precise Ordnance Survey grid references privately to Police Scotland, the Highland Council and mountain-rescue authorities, but never published them for thrill-seekers to use as a treasure map.
Most readers dismissed my warnings as ghost stories. Occasionally somebody answered with an account of voices calling from empty woodland or tracks belonging to no known animal. I always replied with the same message: stay away from those hills. Some things are better left undisturbed.
On 18 October 2025, a notification from my laptop cut through the silence of my Manchester flat. I had been staring at the same security report for twenty minutes while my thoughts wandered towards places I had trained myself to avoid. Five years of traffic and concrete had not stopped the wilderness finding its way back into my mind.
I expected an enquiry about equipment-testing protocols. Instead I found myself on a forum I had bookmarked months earlier but never dared explore properly. Its subject was unexplained disappearances in the Monadhliath and western Cairngorms. The header showed mist between Scots pines, and my chest tightened.
Most threads contained conspiracy theories and ghost stories, but some included details I recognised. A newly active thread stood at the top. The username was Brodie Testament.
The title made my blood freeze.
"My father's journals: Alastair Brodie, survivor of the six-stalker disappearance, 14 October 1981."
I remembered the old report Callum had shown us in the firelight: six stalkers missing in the Monadhliath on 14 October 1981. Alastair Brodie had been the only one to emerge, raving about things that walked like men and moved like animals. He had survived decades of psychiatric treatment, later been discharged, and died on 03 October 2022.
My finger hovered over the trackpad. Some doors could not be shut once opened.
I clicked.
The post, uploaded by Alastair's child in October 2025, was written with the care of somebody who had spent years deciding whether to reveal a family secret. Alastair had died three years earlier, leaving journals from his long treatment and the quieter years after his discharge.
The post began:
"My father was not mad. He was the only sane person in a world that refused to believe what he had seen. These are his words, written while doctors still thought recording everything might help him heal."
The first entry was dated six months after his rescue.
"The doctors want me to remember everything. They tell me to write it down as though that will make it less real. They think trauma is a splinter: dig it out and the wound heals clean. They do not understand that some wounds are meant to remain infected.
"We went there to stalk red deer. Six of us, with thirty years' experience between us. Professional ghillies and men who knew Highland ground as well as their own gardens. We should have been safe.
"The first sign was the silence. No birds. No insects. Only wind in the pines.
"Gordon said the woodland was holding its breath. We should have turned back then. Instead we found fresh sign everywhere, as if the whole herd were just ahead.
"We followed it higher and deeper into ground none of us had stalked. That was where we found the first kill, hanging from the trees like an offering. It had not merely been butchered. It had been arranged. The organs formed patterns painful to look at.
"Gordon vomited. Big Gordon, who had gralloched a thousand deer without flinching. We should have left. God help us, we should have run.
"But those hills made leaving feel impossible. It was as though the land drew us onwards, promising things we had never known we wanted.
"The voices began on the third night."
I had to leave the desk and stand at my kitchen window. Manchester spread below in a dense field of streetlamps and illuminated tower windows. Safe. Civilised. Nothing like the wilderness that had swallowed my friends and nearly taken me.
Alastair Brodie's words drew me back.
"They copied anyone perfectly. Iain's laugh. Peter clearing his throat before speaking. My own voice calling for help from the trees. We learned not to trust anything we heard after dark.
"The creature took us one by one, but the deaths were not random. It played with us. It studied how we moved and thought, and how we reacted when those we trusted disappeared.
"Gordon lasted longest after me. The tough old bastard fought when it came for him. I heard him screaming from perhaps a mile away. I heard his voice calling my name for hours after he was dead.
"When I escaped, they found pieces of the others across miles of hillside, as if something had stored the best parts for later.
"Here is what I never told the doctors. I saw what the creature truly was. It was Iain.
"Iain disappeared first. We found him torn apart beneath pine boughs. Except he was not dead. He was changing.
"The thing that hunted us wore Iain's face, clothes and wedding ring, but it moved wrongly and wanted what no person should want.
"Doctors have a word for eating human flesh: cannibalism. They treat it as a taboo crossed by damaged minds. They do not understand that in those hills it is a curse.
"Anyone who consumes human flesh there, willingly or otherwise, begins to change. The same corruption can pass through an infected bite or contaminated wound. The victim becomes something that can never be satisfied. Feeding only enlarges the hunger until nothing human remains.
"I escaped because I never ate what I should not have eaten and none of them wounded me. I watched the others change into the very things hunting us.
"There is not one monster. The Famine Walkers are all those who crossed that line or carried the curse in their blood. They are still hungry, still hunting and still waiting for the next party foolish enough to follow fresh tracks into country where nothing living should be."
The entries continued for pages, documenting Alastair's retreat into an isolation that resembled madness but might have been the only rational response to an impossible truth. His handwriting became shakier, yet the account never changed.
I scrolled to the comments, expecting scepticism and enthusiasm for a frightening story. Instead my hand began to tremble.
Walker after walker described voices calling from empty glens. Stalking parties had found carcasses arranged in inexplicable patterns. Mountain-rescue volunteers had followed tracks belonging to no known animal. Every account came from the same broad region where Callum and I had lost everything.
One comment, posted by an account named Heather Badge, stood apart.
"I am a countryside ranger and have worked in these hills for fifteen years. I cannot say this officially, but there are internal precautions for a particular class of unexplained disappearance around the unstable mine ground and adjacent estate. Senior management will not acknowledge a supernatural cause, but experienced staff know which sections to avoid when off duty.
"Three further parties have vanished since Mara Whitlock's expedition, with the same characteristics: one on 22 November 2021, another on 06 October 2023 and the third on 29 September 2024."
My mobile buzzed with a message from one of my security consultancy clients, asking whether a delivery of equipment was still on schedule. Normal life. Normal problems. But my eyes kept returning to the Brodie Testament forum and to Alastair Brodie's careful record of horrors that matched my own memories too precisely to dismiss.
It was 18 October 2025, five years and a day since I had escaped from the Monadhliath. Alastair had survived decades of psychiatric care, eventually been discharged and died on 03 October 2022. Earlier that month, his child had begun posting extracts from the journals he had left behind.
I created an anonymous account.
The username came to me without thought: True Bearing.
Then I began to type. I wrote everything.
I described the stalking expedition and the clients who had treated the Highlands as one more luxury commodity to be bought. Rupert's arrogance. Elliot's innocence. Sonia's analytical mind straining to process the impossible. Callum's stories beside the fire, and the old estate warnings we had dismissed as folklore.
I wrote about the flayed red stag suspended five metres above the ground, the impossible tracks circling our tents and the realisation that more than one creature had been watching us. I described the satellite equipment losing registration, batteries draining without explanation, and the remaining radio, emergency beacon and satellite phones being stolen. I wrote about the thing that wore Elliot's face after death, and the contaminated wound that had changed him with a speed no natural infection could explain. I described his bite infecting Sonia, the bothy burning around us and the principal Famine Walker pursuing us into the abandoned lead-mine workings.
I explained that the name was only a local estate legend, attached over generations to older stories of famine, cannibalism and a curse passed through human flesh, bites and fouled wounds. The Pictish carvings and later Gaelic warnings did not prove what the creature was. They proved only that people had feared something in those mountains long before us.
I gave careful descriptions of the terrain and the broad boundaries of the danger, but I did not publish exact grid references. Those I supplied privately to Police Scotland, the countryside ranger service and mountain-rescue authorities. I would not turn the place into a treasure map for thrill-seekers.
I uploaded photographs from the rugged waterproof compact camera I had carried in my chest pouch throughout the expedition. It had survived the mine collapse when our other equipment had not. The images showed the elongated tracks pressed into the mud, the symbols cut into birch and rowan trunks, and the carved chamber beneath the mountain. They showed marks left by strides of more than two metres and warnings older than any estate boundary.
The hardest part was writing about Callum.
I described his courage and his sacrifice. I wrote about how he had held the creature beside the unstable gelignite long enough for me to reach the side adit, and how the blast had buried the principal Walker without proving it dead. I wrote about finding Callum near the adit's outlet after the explosion had thrown him clear, mortally wounded among the rocks. I wrote about the promise he had demanded from me: that I would warn people and make certain others stayed away.
I posted the account at 02:00 and regretted it almost at once.
Who was I to drag my friend's memory into an internet forum filled with conspiracies? What good could come from adding my voice to the multitude of people insisting that monsters were real?
By morning, the post had forty-seven replies.
Some were what I had expected: accusations of creative writing, attention-seeking and fraud. Others carried weight. They contained details that matched my experience too closely to be coincidence. A stalking guide near Fort William had found red-deer organs arranged in the same deliberate patterns. A geology student had discovered carvings resembling those in my photographs inside caves nearly fifty miles away.
A mountain-rescue volunteer said they had noticed a pattern in incidents classified as unexplained wilderness fatalities but had never connected them until reading my account.
The most disturbing response came as a private message from a user named Heather Badge.
'Your story matches reports dated 22 November 2021, 06 October 2023 and 29 September 2024. All involved stalking parties or people travelling through the same general area you described.'
I read on.
'We found camps torn apart, drag marks leading into the woodland and communications equipment deliberately damaged or removed. There were no survivors. The public summaries blamed falls, exposure, equipment failure and animal scavenging. The restricted investigation records are less certain. Three more families have been destroyed by something the authorities cannot acknowledge exists.'
The ranger's message continued.
'I've been trying to secure a temporary safety restriction for years. The unstable mine workings, fatalities and hazardous terrain provide a lawful basis, but there has never been enough evidence to define the danger properly. Your post is the first detailed survivor account we have. If you're willing to go on record, we may finally be able to keep people away.'
I stared at the message for an hour, weighing Callum's dying words against my need to remain hidden.
Going on record would mean interviews and investigations. It might mean returning to the mountains with teams who believed that proper equipment and enough personnel would allow them to study or contain something that had fed there for generations.
In the end, I added a short update to my original post.
'Officials have contacted me about returning to these mountains with specialist equipment and support teams. Some believe the creature can be studied, contained or perhaps killed permanently.
'They are wrong.
'This is not something you fight. It is something you avoid. The ancient carvings and the later warnings preserved in local oral tradition show that people understood the danger long before we did. They marked it, remembered it and kept away.
'We should do the same.
'To anyone reading this: stay out of the exclusion areas I have described. Do not stalk deer there. Do not follow fresh tracks into country that has fallen unnaturally quiet. Do not trust voices calling from the trees, even when they sound like people you know. The creatures can repeat only voices and phrases they have heard, but they listen for a long time before they use them.
'Some evils are better left undisturbed. Callum Fraser died protecting me from something that should never have existed. The best way to honour his sacrifice is to ensure that no one else faces what we faced.
'I have given the precise Ordnance Survey grid references to the appropriate authorities. I will not publish them. Share the boundaries of the warning with stalkers, walkers and anyone else who may enter the estate, but do not treat this account as a challenge or an invitation.
'The mountains remember everything. Some memories have teeth.'
I closed the laptop and walked back to the kitchen window. Manchester spread below me in a dense field of streetlamps and illuminated tower windows, blurred now as exhaustion finally caught up with me.
For the first time in five years, I felt relief.
I had kept my promise to Callum. The warning was spreading through forums and social media, reaching people who might otherwise wander into the same nightmare we had found.
My mobile buzzed again. Another client. Another ordinary problem belonging to the world of concrete, deliveries and traffic lights. I had built a good life there, far from the woodland I had feared since childhood and safe from the wilderness that had nearly claimed me.
As I turned away from the window, I caught my reflection in the dark glass.
For a moment, my eyes were black.
I blinked, and they were normal again: hazel, shifting between green and brown with the light, just as they always had.
Just as they always had.
I touched my late grandmother's brass Silva-style compass, hanging against my chest, and felt its familiar weight beneath my fingers. North was north. Up was up. The principal creature lay buried beneath the Monadhliath, and I would never see those mountains again.
Some promises were worth keeping, even when they cost everything.